Driana, Wielder of Brute and Force

[quote=devdevil][font=georgia][size=5][i]~Changed her name to Destiny, ignore the title~[/i][/size][/font] Hey guys, quick champion idea I came up with that I thought I ought to share: Destiny is a melee support with high CC and good at peeling and interrupting enemies with her two hammers, named Brute and Force. I also imagined she would be a Noxian, but I'm still undecided. --------------------------------------- [b][color=#ff0000][font=georgia][size=4]Nothing Will Stop Me (Passive)[/size][/font][/color][/b] [i]When Destiny uses an ability, she gains [/i]10%[i] tenacity for [/i]3[i] seconds. This can stack up to [/i]3[i] times.[/i] [b][color=#ff0000][font=georgia][size=4]Hammer Tunnel (Q)[/size][/font][/color][/b] [i]Destiny sends Force into the ground, dealing[/i] 50/70/90/110/130 (+40% of ability power)[i] magic damage and silencing nearby enemies for [/i]0.5 [i]seconds. Additionally, her hammer travels underground to target location with a movement speed of [/i]300[i]. When it reaches target location, it deals[/i] 20/40/60/80/100 (+20% of ability power)[i] magic damage and stuns them for [/i]0.5[i] to [/i]2.5[i] seconds, depending on how far Brute traveled (the farther away, the longer the stun). If there is no enemy by the time Brute reaches target location, it will wait for [/i]3.5[i] seconds for an enemy to be at target location before returning to Destiny.[/i] Cooldown: 13/12/11/10/9 seconds Range of AoE burst to nearby enemies: 200 Range that hammer can travel: 1200 Mana Cost: 80/90/100/110/120 [b][color=#ff0000][font=georgia][size=4]Brutal Knockback (W)[/size][/font][/color][/b] [i]Destiny throws Brute in a straight line. The first enemy/ally Brute comes into contact with will knock back enemies in target direction, dealing [/i]60/100/140/180/220 (+40% of ability power)[i], and slow them by [/i]13/15/17/19/21%[i] for [/i]2[i] seconds then return to Destiny.[/i] Cooldown: 17/16.5/15/14.5/13 Range: 850 Mana Cost: 80/90/100/110/120 [b][color=#ff0000][font=georgia][size=4]Out of My Way (E)[/size][/font][/color][/b] [i]Destiny throws Brute forward with such strength that enemies are dealt [/i]50/90/130/170/210 (+30% of ability power)[i] damage and knocked aside. Destiny may activate this again after [/i]0.5[i] seconds to jump to her hammer. This ability can go through terrain.[/i] Cooldown: 19/18.5/18/17.5/17 Range: 600/625/650/675/700 Mana Cost: 90 [b][color=#ff0000][font=georgia][size=4]Rally to Me (R)[/size][/font][/color][/b] Passive: [i]Destiny gains [/i]3/4/5[i] armor and magic resist for each nearby ally and allies receive [/i]50%[i] of the benefit.[/i] Active: [i]The benefit from Destiny's passive is doubled for [/i]10[i] seconds. During that time, whenever Destiny damages an enemy champion, her movement speed is increased by [/i]20/30/40%[i] for [/i]1[i] second (cannot stack). Additionally, if Destiny scores a kill or assist, she gains an additional [/i]15%[i] increased movement speed, and nearby allies gain [/i]10%[i] increased movement speed for [/i]3[i] seconds (can stack with on-hit effect). Within the [/i]10[i] seconds, Destiny's basic attacks deal an additional [/i]30/55/80 (+25% of ability power)[i] magic damage and lowers the enemy's magic resist by [/i]5[i] for [/i]5[i] seconds (can stack up to [/i]5[i] times).[/i] Cooldown: 110/100/80 Range: 1050 Mana Cost: 100 ----------------------------------------- Anyways, thanks for reading my idea, feedback is welcome, and I'll add more info ([s]mana costs[/s], lore, look, possible skins - in that order) later~ [spoiler=Patch Notes] August 21 - Champion created August 22 - (Nerf Time!) Q now has a brief delay and now stuns, with a higher cooldown. W is now a skillshot. All abilities have had their damage lowered. Ultimate benefits lowered with a movement speed boost added. Ratios increased for more benefit late game. August 23 - Passive now stacks, Q now stuns and does damage to nearby enemies and has a lower cooldown, W now only effects enemies and slows, E nerfed slightly, Ultimate now has a passive and added movement speed and basic attack buffs. August 24 - W now stops when it comes into contact with an ally as well as enemy, R buffed slightly. August 25 - Name changed to Destiny, added mana costs. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=M4XiiMUS]Well my critique is to increase the damage of her W because it is extremely low. And her ulminate could pretty much make her unkillable, 400 armor and MR? That's sooo much. Maybe lower it to 20 or 30. And the passive how long does it last? I would say 2 seconds at the most. And the name, I first thought this was about Diana... But then I reread it, so I would change that. Lol. I do quite like this idea though![/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf]Agreed on the Resists part. Especially with allies getting half the amount. A free 200 armor and MR pretty much [b]instantly[/b] wins a teamfight. Especially at a range of 1200, which is a little bit larger than [[mystic shot]]. Going along with that, her passive is almost useless. She's not going to get to 10% HP unless she completely forgets to use her ult. Maybe change it to something like, "*Created champion* gains X/Y/Z tenacity after using a skill. This can stack a total of X times." Dropping the ult's resistance giving to 10/20/30 per enemy nearby, and allies get 25% of the effect seems like it'd be more manageable. It means you don't instantly win teamfights, but your team is a little beefier overall. It's a fairly broken concept though and would [b]never[/b] see the light of day. Having an unavoidable knockup on a minimum 6 second cooldown is ridiculous. Almost as bad as [[terrify]] or [[puncturing taunt]] depending on the range. Plus, it deals damage and cannot be [[cleanse]]d or [[Quicksilver Sash]]-ed out of.[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]Thanks a lot guys! Will work on changes when I get back from school[/quote]

[quote=Mooninites]This is the problem with player concepts, they're never balanced, and don't really fit the role. Her passive is a good passive, on pretty much everyone except a support. Her Q does a lot of damage, with a good ratio, on a point-and-click knock up thats got a really long duration. This skill is retarded broken. Her W is kind of OP E has massive range, deal aton of damage, insane ratio, and is a dash R - i laughed when it said "nearby allies" and has a range of 1200. The numbers are way off, like retarded broken You basically created a champion with 3 forms of CC and a massive tank steroid without any risk. All of her CC is point-and-click, they're is no risk to playing her. Not to mention her damage is straight up retarded. This is why I hate player concepts, people just make their creation the dumbest most fucking overpowered piece of crap in the world.[/quote]

[quote=devdevil][quote=Mooninites] This is the problem with player concepts, they're never balanced, and don't really fit the role. Her passive is a good passive, on pretty much everyone except a support. Her Q does a lot of damage, with a good ratio, on a point-and-click knock up thats got a really long duration. This skill is retarded broken. Her W is kind of OP E has massive range, deal aton of damage, insane ratio, and is a dash R - i laughed when it said "nearby allies" and has a range of 1200. The numbers are way off, like retarded broken You basically created a champion with 3 forms of CC and a massive tank steroid without any risk. All of her CC is point-and-click, they're is no risk to playing her. Not to mention her damage is straight up retarded. This is why I hate player concepts, people just make their creation the dumbest most fucking overpowered piece of crap in the world. [/quote] The point of player concepts is creating and sharing something that you thought of, not necessarily because you expect it to get comments saying 'Oh yeah, that's perfect' or 'Really balanced champion with good ratios'. That's why there's an 'edit' button, so that you can change mistakes and take the 'helpful' feedback you get and put it to good use. Player concepts aren't supposed to be perfect, I'd be amazed if I saw one that didn't get any criticism. I like to think of it as a block of, let's say, marble, that you're trying to whittle down into a satisfactory look for YOU, not other people, because everyone has different opinions, that's why nothing's perfect. TL;DR - Nothing's perfect, that's why people accept 'helpful' and 'kind' feedback so that it can be better. [color=#ff0000]Someone displays their sculpture, letting people whittle it down into a more beautiful sculpture, not hammer it into nothing, which is what you're doing. Please don't be a jerk to anyone else.[/color][/quote]

[quote=Isolanporzellator]I liked pretty much every CC heavy bruiser in this game, so I won't rage at the sight of her CC. Nevertheless, the key to all these CC heavy champs is that they have a high skill cap and high chance of couterplay, especially because CCs are hard to land like e.g. [[Zac]]s [[Elastic Slingshot]]. This is why I would suggest turning the W ability into a skillshot, knocking back enemies around the first champion hit. This would make it a more versatile tool to disrupt the enemy team while offering a higher chance of dodging or tanking the projectile. I would nerf the E range to 600/625/650/675/700, also giving a higher reward for leveling and not being too op with the dash. For the Q, I suggest removing the knockup and reworking it into a stun with increasing duration of 1.2/1.3/1.4/1.5/1.6 seconds. This offers a chance of counterplay with [[Cleanse]]. And to prevent the ability from being like [[Dazzle]]. As I would maintain the high damage output for farming, I suggest that allies can take the projectile to prevent it from being op. For the ultimate, I would greatly reduce the armor/mr buff, while adding a movement speed boost that helps her to stick at her targets.[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]Edited the champion! Thanks to all who helped me make this champion not so weirdly OP! Check the Patch Notes for information on what I changed! More crit and feedback is welcome, of course.[/quote]

[quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao]Excellent response to Moon, basically sums up every response to a champion concept. 1 thing, I dislike the name "Driana". Is there some relation to diana, but she is dry? Hue. Yeah, don't like how the names are too similar, other than that, good concept (:[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]Trying to brainstorm with names, wish I could change the title of the thread too :/ Current brainstormed names: Avery Destiny Synclaire Blair Skylar Sam (If I choose a unisex name I might possibly tie it into the lore)[/quote]