Hey, nice guide.

You should try to build mobility boots for
extra speed when you are going to gank a lane.

You said you fixed it, I guess it's still wrong and Blade of the Ruined King must be the first item you buy on Zed, always. And Talon doesn't get weaker late game, trust me, he can be as deadly as you for the enemy carry.
And your guide isn't nice looking and your information is either incomplete or completely wrong. I can't upvote but nor I am going to downvote. Just try to optimize it a little bit and it will be worth an upvote!

Thanks for pointing the ability sequence out. Fixed.

I agree with the skill sequence, it isn't correct. This guide didn't draw me in enough to really read through it. Some aspects have to be refined. It's better that you acknowledge what your guide flaws and fix them under your own premise, rather than having people tell you what to change.

Incorrect skill sequence.