My only problem with your guide is your items. It is the only section I noticed you didn't go into enough detail. Try adding a section on starting items, first recall items, mid game items, and so on. It is literally the only thing I see wrong with your guide

However, I think so far this is a really well written guide that goes into tonnes of detail. Throughout the entire guide, I am constantly "awwwwwed" at it unnable to take my eyes away because of how attractive it looks. I am giving your guide a +1. Nicely Done!

Like everyone is saying, don't publish an unfinished guide. It only encourages downvoters. Best thing to do is archive, and complete, and then re-publish it. And please, do NOT re-publish it to get it at the top of the guides list without first completing it.

Don't post incomplete guides, you sould keep saving it until it's complete, then you publish. Also, activate Comment-to-vote to avoid anonymous downvotes.

I suggest you archive this guide until it's complete, then re-release it.

hes going arc

lol this garen with so much ad

when you write sight ward it looks better than sight ward in a text

Have an instant downvote for being incomplete. Also, your skill sequence is wrong and item sequence is wonky.

Q is a one-point wonder, you should be maxing E first and not the two simultaneously.

Your item sequence should be Brutalizer and then tanky, then complete Black Cleaver (or Ghostblade) after that. Maw is not a core item, and another important situational item is IE.