Hi! I'm not a top lane main, so I can't really say anything about your build in general. However, there are a few things that I think you might want me to point out.

I'll start with the colors. There are so many colors my eyes are starting to hurt from reading it. I really don't think there's a need to put so many colors to emphasize what you're saying xD In fact, by adding so many of them, you're actually taking away from the actual guide in general, and makes the emphasis, not emphasized at all, if you get my point.

Also, you've done a nice job of saying what you think is great for his build, but not as much on why that is. For example, your summoner spells/runes/masteries. You told us that they're good on a bruiser tank, but you haven't told us why. In addition, maybe add some explanation as to the skills themselves? The sequence and the advantages of each are nice and in depth, but not so much the actual abilities and what they do. What I find is usually the most helpful is when the author tells tips or warnings on the abilities.

Other than those things, I really liked your guide! :) Keep in mind, everything I've said is just my two cents. You don't actually need to change anything ^_^ I'm just stating my point of view.