Now its a joke to everyone, if you did it for fun and only ONE time he shouldn't of made a guide of it, i'm sorry but its a bad build.

I think what you guys are mostly failing to understand is that this build is pretty much a little inside joke derived from an ARAM we played one night (I am a constant playing partner of his.)
We have used this but once and only out of desperation when he got forced into a lane (it actually worked really well) but yeah, this guide isn't to go take into ranked or something it is just if you want to have a bit of fun.

I still appreciate the feedback even if all of it is negative. I never said I was in any position to make guides or anything either. It was more of an experiment and obviously it didn't work out in my favor.

As I say, you are more in position to use guides than making them.

I would give feedback, but you have yet to learn more about League before making your own guide. Because you really don't know what an AD Offtank is to begin with.

I'm sorry for being like this. Simple basics of life: Not everyone can be writer, there has to be readers. If everyone was a writer, and there were no readers, it would ruin the balance. So life has offered us balance by providing non-writers :D

so plenty to work on here. i will start with items/build/such.

with your build and runes and masteries you are going to have to be the master of trades cause you are going to get blown up. udyr has some built in tankiness but you don't build a single defensive item...which makes me wonder why you think this is an off tank build? also why would you take enchanted armor when you don't build any bonus armor?

i have run full offense udyr top lane before....and unless you are playing against someone who simply can't trade with you you are going to be nothing more than a split pusher....because you will get blown up in team fights.

not saying a pure split push udyr doesn't do work but it just doesn't provide as much usefulness as the usual off tank build for top udyr.

i mean if you get caught with 1 hard cc with this set up you are done.

as far as the rest of the info you provide...just really doesn't exist

Well, thanks for the feedback at least.

I would tell you whats wrong with the guide, but I'll just go ahead and tell you whats correct. Sadly, I can't find anything correct in the guide, not even the runes are reliable to be honest.