I don't know about your spanish guide but this one is pretty weak. It's way too short and the structure is maybe ok but there aren't many chapters anyway. Explain things more in detail.

Your reasoning for your rune choice is weak. Why those over others? Are they good for this kind of play style? In a guide you have to answer these questions to convince other people to take your guide serious.

There is a really famous guide to making a guide, you should read it. There are way too many colors without a reason. It's not difficult to format your videos centered.
Rod of ages is pretty useless on lux. She's long-ranged, so she doesn't need the hp and you buy anyway a mana regen item.

Everyone can look at the tooltip in-game to know waht it does. Explanations or further tips are necessary.

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Pls edit your guide. Ask for some advice.

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Super Wrong Guide :)

Super guide with videos that help me a lot

Super Info Thank You ! :)

Morello is now a better option with the changes.

I agree Lich bane seems like a waste. She eats mana mad too so the grail is a good idea. I held off 5v1 mid just last night and it would never happen without mana regen. They lost and they never took a single turret of mine. That's just an example of her power when built right.

La pienso probar! xD

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I agree with Vynertje, Lich Bane is quite a waste on Lux when you can get better items like Rylai's and/or a defensive item. But if you are going glass cannon, Lich Bane is not for Lux. Lich Bane is an item made specifically for Basic Attacks, it compliments her Passive but only that, it is really a waste of all her power.

I also don't like Hybrid Penetration on Lux, Magic Penetration is better.

And I don't know if it is just me, but the accounts who upvoted this guide seems a bit, interesting, 3 of them being created all on the same day, all only commenting on one guide and upvoting it, and doing nothing else afterwards. I'm just saying it looks fake but it might just be me.