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Creator: ShoreXShot June 16, 2012 3:09pm
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Let me know what you think... needs something just cant figure it out.
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Well first of all, I can't see your sig.

You might want to get that fixed.

EDIT: Now that you fixed it, it looks good if not simple. I'm not a major image person though. You're gonna have to get other people to C&C.
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From what I've heard, it's better if your text is close to the focal point instead of off to the side. But I'm not really an expert. I'm sure there are exceptions.

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Text has always been one of my problems as I focus on the graphics and sometimes just don't include the text... Exceptions being when the sig is all text(banners/logos).

A majority of the work I put into my sigs is in the rendering... I always do my own renders, which can take a decent amount of time when you have to deal with a lot of particles...


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Too dark, terrible text, no centralized focal point and the multifocal vibe ain't working for you.


One effect that is lously executed :/

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I agree, but in a less harsh manner lol.

I think it would look better if the guy on the cliff was larger. And the dissolved (pardon my film terminology) render to the left doesn't seem to fit with the busy background that's already there.

I think it's a cool concept, but you should save the render for something else and zoom in on the cliff guy. That way, when you put the text close to him, it won't be so difficult to read.

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Might just be my personal opinion, and I can't tell how you should apply this, but I think some contrast would help a lot. It looks slightly dull. Some more lively colours along with the contrast difference should make it a whole lot more interesting to look at.
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You don't have a clear focus. It's just a bunch of stuff putt together without creativity.

I always say to starting photoshoppers:

START SIMPLE

with simple i mean:

- Render
- Background
- Some text

You can use some effects with brush/lighting/gradient but don't start with multiple c4d's in a signature. First learn the basic, then go further.

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