HELP!

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]I'm writing this piece and I can't figure out what it needs. It's not done yet, I don't even have all the orchestra stuff written.... But listen and tell me what you think: http://grooveshark.com/#/s/Victory+Awaits/47BmwI?src=5[/quote]

[quote=JEFFY40HANDS]jeez you scared meh with the big HELP! I was like ZOMG WTF IS GOING ON!!!! Ok well maybe I wasn't THAT dramatic, but @_@ you freaked meh out chica. EDIT: Also, I'm at work so I can't listen RIGHT meow T_T[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]I NEED HELP. THIS PIECE IS KILLING ME........................... I CAN'T FIGURE OUT HOW TO END IT. EDIT: shit caps lock[/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf]It hurts me too... I know how to end it, I think, but... can't find the words for it.[/quote]

[quote=B-Wong]Why you end without resolving? Ending sounds super awkward[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]it has no ending lol I can't figure out how to end it! Did you not read the posts?[/quote]

[quote=JEFFY40HANDS]It's the song that never ends, it just goes on and on my friends. Some people started singing it not knowing what it was, and they'll continue singing it forever just because. It is the song that never ends.......[/quote]

[quote=iBradlee][quote=Lugignaf] I know how to end it, I think, but... can't find the words for it. [/quote] WUBWUBWUBWUB But, srsly, I can't put my finger on it. But it definitely is missing somethinggg Sounds good, though[/quote]

[quote=B-Wong][quote=The_Nameless_Bard] it has no ending lol I can't figure out how to end it! Did you not read the posts? [/quote] I did. JUST RESOLVE. SO DA EASY[/quote]

[quote=gwadzila]1:04 to 1:23 should come in again, louder, then one have it just go lower and lower until you have a really low note going DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN and then it ends.[/quote]