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Posted a Comment: Mar 16th, 2012
"Who would have guessed that you, mr troll, would find you way to my guide..."
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Posted a Comment: Mar 16th, 2012
"Could use a little more color. It seems kind of weird to just pick up philo and heart of gold when jungling and then build out neither of them. Why not change out some quints instead of buying an item?
Good guide that you are obviously still working with :)"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 16th, 2012
"This guide needs a lot of work. Check out Jhoijhoi's guide about making guides, I'm sure it will make a big difference for you.
Your item build also needs some serious work. You need to look at what items actually work"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 16th, 2012
"A very comprehensive guide, I think your build needs a little work on that last item, A Chubby Baby made some great points.
Instead of having 2 cheat sheets with exactly the same things on them but 1 item, just talk about the item differences in the guide itself.
A Good guide with little left "
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Posted a Comment: Mar 16th, 2012
"I'm exactly on-page with A Chubby Baby,
Next time make sure your guide is at least 90% of what you expect it to be as a finished, published product.
Make sure you take the time to make everything clear and easy to understand."
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Posted a Comment: Mar 16th, 2012
"You have quite a bit of color, but no real coding in the guide.
Check out Jhoijhoi's guide about "making guides" as it will be a huge help to you.
Try and cut down on the ****, it is only effective once or"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 16th, 2012
"Sooooo much to comment on:
1) When you are creating your guide there is a check-box that says "comment to vote," you need to click that right now before you get spammed with unfavorable votes.
2) Check out Jhoijoh"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 16th, 2012
"So, you made an AP guide to Ezreal. It is well though out, well phrased, and you feel good about it. However, anyone who reads it will think "why should I even play AP Ez?"
You should probably come up with a well though out reason for it and add a section at the beginning explaining yo"


