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Posted a Comment: Mar 28th, 2013
"defenitaly a big improvement,
good job!"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 26th, 2013
"Hello again,
there are still a few pointers I have to give you:
Some of your starting options are impossible because you dont have enough money at start
Try spell-check your spelling and grammar, this is really easy if you search a spellcheck on google
Try to explain the order of max"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 26th, 2013
"Really BASIC guide!
You have made some HUGE mistakes like earlier mentioned!
But don't worry, I made the same mistake with my first guide (also fizz)
And GarenLink is actually one of the guys who helped me out :D
Try to learn from the comments,
some of them might be harsh but don"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 26th, 2013
"Hello,
I don't really know much about Yi.
BUT try to fiz the mistakes like the ones told by the first two comments.
And try to add some color, because now your guide is REALLY boring to read.
Some colour and some images can make it a lot more interesting to read and will get you some Up"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 26th, 2013
"
Well I kind of like the rod of ages on fizz because it gives you some more Health and Mana.
But "
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Posted a Comment: Mar 25th, 2013
"Hey there!
I did not really read the whole guide.
Because you did not use CAPITAL LETTERS. I found the parts I read really hard to understand.
Also try to make it more interesting using images, videos and colors.
I am NOT a pro guide maker but the one I made also had a lot of mistakes at"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 24th, 2013
"Ok I totally understand!
I allready forgot I opened this thread after I updated the grammar part of my guide!
I wasnt ment as advertising, hereby my appoligies
thank you for the help!"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 23rd, 2013
"On what server are you?
If you are on EUW, add me and I will play with you and give you in-game tips.
I dont care if you HOLD ME BACK....
As long as you at least consider my advice you make me happy :D
My name is Threee on EUW.
You can also allways send me PM with questions!
I am here to hel"
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Posted a Comment: Mar 23rd, 2013
"I really enjoyed watching this!
You really motivated me to buy Trundle!
Overall a very good job!"
