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Greeting Padrepio, nice guide you made i wanted to tell you that its very nice guide i can see you really trying to make guide the best you can i would recommend this guide to anyone you wrote evrything i need allot of information and stuff great job keep doing it. By the way i really like this guide make more like this.

If u dont mind can i get a video of an entire game with brand so that i can further understand the game play.Oh and can have a section that helps with how position brand better. Thanks.

helpful because we know how brand is so op

Heya, thanks for requesting a discussion :)

1/ I think your items section in your cheat sheet is a little messy. By shortening the 2nd title, you can then fit the Core Items in the first row. As for Situational/Unusual, think about how you could break those down into "at a glance I should by" sections. Personally, I would focus on either mid or support, not both. By having the Support Start at the bottom, you've confusing people a little. Is it a support guide? Is it a mid guide?

2/ In your Threats section, you mention a lot of "you can shut x down early". I don't read many threat sections, but it seems like a lot of your comments are about having to beat the enemy early, which is sort of... obvious? Maybe think about some tips that are super useful to know. Like ie, Ziggs can use his ult to assist other lanes, so be sure to call miss after level 6... I mean, that doesn't pertain necessarily to Brand, but stuff like that. Interactions that you've discovered from playing against those champions. "You should be ok" doesn't really help a reader.

3/ Paragraph breaks/sentences. Try and keep your paragraphs "together" and double enter space between paragraphs.

4/ I would say remove the spoilers and let the gifs shine! :)

5/ If you want your guide to be super cohesive, stick to one-three colours that are complementary or in the same scheme. For example, if you're working with Brand, pick a skin you'd like to use for the entire guide and base the colours off that skin. Or if you like showing off multiple skins, try and keep the colour scheme relevant for the skin you're showing off.

6/ I like your explanation of mana worth! Though I think ultimatives are a little difficult to uphold, as there are so many "what ifs". You say "minions > poke", but is it worth it to get a minion if you get poked yourself and trade nothing back? Because after a few minion > poke exchanges, you're too low to stay to farm minions, meaning you need to recall and lose them.

7/ The game settings chapter should probably go at the end of the guide, because while it's relevant to gameplay, it feels sort of odd smack bang in the middle. Thoughts?

Hope this helps! jhoi

Thanks for the guide. A bit wonky on items - it states Hunting Guise as a core item and it took me some time to figure out that you advise it for early buy since its upgrade is a CORE item. As far as I understood you recommend selling Spellthief's Edge in later game after quest is finished. I'm new to LoL (playing 2 weeks)and would like to know the drawbacks of starting with Spellthief's Edgy vs Doran's Ring. As I see it Spellthief's Edge is just better - not only it gives passive gold and mana regen (not that expensive to upgrade to +50%) also cdr, while Doran's is just unupgradable (not sure if that's a word =) )

I am still fairly new to league (I have only been playing for about 5 months) and my first champ I got was Brand. Since then I have mained them and I recently discovered your guide. With your build and how in depth it is, I was able to get to silver 5 already. Thank you so much for creating this!

I suggest that you put Gragas in here. Not a huge deal but he might get some kills on you until late. game.

Beaitiful. and hot.

I like this, but I feel like you need a mana item. Maybe an ROA since the health synergizes with the health you're already building.

You can absolutely reach 5/5. Everyone can. It just takes more work.

- You're right; squeezing long explanations into a note is bad. Consider something like "check items section for more details" or something that tells the reader there IS an explanation somewhere else, instead of just leaving them wondering what to do.

- Definitely keep the red color scheme; it's awesome! I understand the logic behind using green, but there are other colors you could use that would achieve the same purpose. Try out darkorange, blue, yellow, or some other color that complements red. When I wrote my guide, googling "bbcode colors" helped me a LOT because there's dozens of colors to choose from. Experiment! :)

- Ok, the mastery banner makes sense now. I didn't think about its function as a wiki link. Good call there.

- More gifs :D

- Getting a 5/5 is basically divided into two goals. The first is to make your guide basically flawless, so that anyone reading would say "Well you really just nailed it; there's nothing you could've done better." Your Introduction and Items sections are like this already, and everything else is almost there.

The second is to have something unique, something that sets your guide apart that no other Brand guide has. If you look at some of the top guide writers, like jhoijhoi, Nahtulee, Vapora Dark, Emikadon, etc. you'll notice their guides aren't just perfect, they have a special something that makes them unique. Usually it's custom artwork or insane complex coding, or maybe SUPER detailed in-depth sections like Vapora's Talon guide. Since your guide is already in-depth as it is, aim for one (or all) of these:

I'm always happy to help :)
If you want me to follow up with a re-review, just drop a request on my review shop thread.