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Reviewing my guide

Creator: Silverman43 August 6, 2018 12:12pm
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Hello I am Silverman43 and I have created a guide for my main champion Maokai a while ago. I have been working many hours over the last months and Im not even finished yet! (Jungle Pathing is WIP)

My guide already got the in-depth mark, but Im still looking for things to improve.
That's why Im asking if anyone wants to review my guide. There don't seem to be many review shops open right now, so that's why Im making a new thread of this. The link of my guide is in my signature.

Thanks in advance!
Thanks to @ Jovy for the signature!
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Looks like you could expand your matchup section. You only have a few matchups, if Maokai is your main you should have played against the most common toplaners several times.
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Yeah thats right. I just haven't paid much attention to the matchup section. Ill get some more matchups asap.
Thanks to @ Jovy for the signature!
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My two cents:

Great stuff:
-Looks gorgeous
-Very indepth

Tips (everthing I dont mention is fine imo):
=Cheat sheet
--Could use some notes

=Runes
--Under keystone, center the "or"

=Items
--Make it more obvious when you should buy what situational item.
--Text about Banshee's Veil is somehwat wrong imo

=Ganking
--Could use something about lane-gank

=Conclusion
--Missing an "s" in "one of the best tankS"

(if you could in turn have a look at one of my guides as well, that would be awesome:) )
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Thanks man!
Really appreciate your feedback!
Im gonna improve the things you said soon. Thank you for letting me know.

Of course I want to take a look at your guide(s)! You can expect some feedback soon!
Thanks to @ Jovy for the signature!
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Cheers mate, thanks for the review on the LB guide :)

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