That's ok, carry Udyr is still viable as his dmg output is extremely high, but I mean it's harder to success in higher ELO. I don't even know your summoner's lvl or wins but from my own experience I can say that any smart player who knows how to play his champ can easily snare-stun you and they will, so if you build as a carry with little to no defense items ur chance to survive a burst from 2-3 enemy champs is low. That's why i said going offtank is more viable, u can soak up some dmg and still rape their carries, so u don't need that much dmg to success, as Udyr has a decent dmg output on his own.

Btw the thing about PD is, I feel I'd buy it just for the MS and AS, but mostly for MS, crit is meh compared to burst from trinity IMO and TF gives you that MS you are looking for but also a great burst and some HP, slow... Anyway it's still viable, you get more AS from it and your dmg from Bloodrazor is higher. But I think Tiger Stance, passive and bloodrazor give you enough AS so you can build TF and gain much more benefits than if you'd build a PD.

Don't feel bad about criticism anyway, I hope this can help you improve your guide ;)

try it and you'd realised that it doesnt lack defense really...he's like trynd, one tiger change and hes back up to full with his lifesteal, i shredded a max farmed cho with 4k health and i killed him in 4 seconds.

Lacks defense. But I'd get 1-15-14. Make most of your passive through the boosted dodge.

well thnx alot for the input, but dude im playing with this build and getting 20-5, 16-3 21-6, 6-0, 9-1 etc. its really good once u have a main tank, but as i said im love to play carries, and i wont lie his dmg burst with tiger strike is really gay, on hit and carries are down to half, from my experience lol...i will try tri force tho, it really will help i believe, ive used it before thom and it works really well. and i will try other runes soon ^.^

So.. you focus on the dmg from tiger stance but you rush a PD which gives you attack speed and crit mostly, while tiger stance scales with AD, so your PD just makes u move faster and rely more on your AA's. I think a Trinity force gives you enough MS and AS but also provides strong burst with sheen proc and some AD, HP and slow from phage, which makes it much better than a PD in Udyr imo. Also boots of swiftness are ok but u got enough MS with PD/TF so its kinda wasted, merc treads or tabi seems to be much better options.

There's no reason to go malice runes as crit is a secondary stat on Udyr, a high percent of ur dmg comes from tiger stance DoT and Madred's (both are magic dmg so Archaic Knowledge should be taken) so AD or AS work better on him. Also FM gives you a nice health boost but no resistances at all, so u are not that tanky after all, but that's ok as long as u wanna be an AD carry (although I think Udyr should be offtank).