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Creator: Lugignaf September 6, 2011 1:10pm

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jhoijhoi wrote:

Fantastic service! I hope more people find this, you helped Siveo a lot, and his guide looks really professional because of it. +rep


Looks :O It IS professional hahaha :P

NoNo, I really have to thank you for the outstanding help with my guide ;)

Credited you and hopefully you will get more and more people that need your help!
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Thanks for the reassurance guys. :D
@Searz: Ok. So I missed one. <_< It would be more correct if there was a "that" in there as well.
@Nickname: Haven't asked/ don't know how to get it stickied.

@Everyone else who requested: School is annoying and it's been pulling me away from this. I will do them tonight. Or at least 2 of them.
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Lugignaf wrote:

It would be more correct if there was a "that" in there as well.

Not necessarily. I don't think that would make any difference for how correct the sentence is.
"Blizzard spoke thus; Thou shalt not BM. And the players replied Nay, I shall Play my hand with Lethal already on the board. And so Blizzard sent unto them this Brawl of Yogg, As a lesson for their sins of Pride and Greed, for he is the Prophet of Madness and RNG. On that day, the tavern descended into an era of chaos and darkness, until the weekend passed and everyone forgot all about it. Amen. Book of SMOrc, Verse 20, Chapter 4." - Feam T
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Caught a very small mistake in the revision of the Shen build :)

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Greater Seal of Armor - You are a tank/support so you want to have quite a lot of armor to take less physical damage.


Great initiative, keep up the good work!

KEARAR - L28 Summoner (EU) - Playing NUNU, ASHE, ANNIE

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Awesome idea. Looks like you could be well in over your head with work, quite quickly. :P
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Yorick has to help here^^.
He is gonna kill you!!!
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Great service. But maybe put some requirements? That the user should check on his own first. Because I can see this being abused by lazy slackers(not pointing to myself :P) +1 rep for u mister.
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marisi wrote:

Great service. But maybe put some requirements? That the user should check on his own first. Because I can see this being abused by lazy slackers(not pointing to myself :P) +1 rep for u mister.


I hope you're not referring to me :O
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SirSpankAlot,

I noticed u always put a ' ' between a word and the ','. Before lugignaf replies with a 3 pages long answer, I reccomend u remove those. Don't put a space between each word and a ','. And try to write 'i' as a capital.

Here I have a few examples.

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Explanation
Impale is skarner's initiation skill, you grab the enemy and are free to pull him around for 1.5 second. I use this to pull the enemy to my allies, this is the most important reason that I build skarner tanky due to the fact that I will have to survive when I initiate.



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4. Now you go kill the Wraiths or the wolves, go to the most nearby.

5. Same as step 4 but then go to the creep you have not slain yet.

6. Go to the Duo Golems.

7. Use smite on one of the golems to engage, kill the smited golem first(you can use a potion here)

8. Recall to your base and buy if possible, if not you will buy longsword and if you ran out of potions on ur first trip buy 1-2



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Thanks for tuning into my first guide, I'll keep updating this guide as much as possible and I hope that you enjoyed reading this guide. Also any feedback is welcome. Contact me in the comment section or in game by the name '' Sir Pedo Alot'' on the EU-West server.



These are just a few. There are a lot more, but I'm to lazy to search for them :P.
That's lugignaf's job
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It's not that I want to offend u, but u can easily eliminate those small mistakes with word docs. Just put everything in word and there will come green lines under it. Otherwise lugignaf will have a lot of work.

Not that I thought of it :P. I just realized that after I read through ur whole guide. After 20 min I realized: Hey! Word can easily solve this XD.
Stupid me :P

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