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Kasadin Poster. My presentation

Creator: RubenDefo December 15, 2011 10:02pm
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Well, I introduced myself in another post, so now itĀ“s time to show my work.
IĀ“ve done this artwork for a brochure that I have to design for an assessment that IĀ“m doing about an event. The reason why the bottom of the image has no work at all is because IĀ“m going to but a black box there with information about the event that IĀ“m doing. I tried to get a sensation of depth, i donĀ“t know if I achieve it. Feedback is more than welcome!!




Hope you guys like it!

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Too messy, there's no depth or focal point (my eyes are looking everywhere) there isn't much flow and there isn't a lightsource try adding some effects not just brushes.
Sigs made by me.

Please +Rep me.
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Nice clipping masks, there is some depth and focus here though, hence the blur.

I like it.
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The depth doesn't work, there are no solid objects anywhere to give it a decent sense of depth, also the focus is taken away by the over sharpened clipping masks.
Sigs made by me.

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I like it a lot.

This guy just goes around giving out criticism to everyone who makes sigs.
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All the feedback is welcome. And all the opinions are respected.
I agree that some parts of the image are over sharpened. Also, in my defense I will say that the image quality is in 50%, cause it was too heavy....ah, and itĀ“s not just a couple of brushes...xD.

Thanks for the feedback.

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Like it alot :) Great job on the blade
+Rep me Plz!!/Thanks to the GrandMasterD, Xiaowiriamu, Missmaw, LaCorpse, The_Nameless_Bard, Spooon and Myself for the Sigs!!

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