hey, this is the person you requested a review from!

My comments:

• 1. Your items for a support are rather weird. If you plan to support, why do you not have any gold per 5 items? If you are buying shurelyas, you need to get philo stone way early because you barely get gold. You should NOT be taking last hits.
  
• 2. I understand your thinking for Rylai’s, but it really is not worth it. First of all, your only one target ability is Dazzle. The stun lasts one second, and its only 2.5 seconds of 35% slow you are paying so much for. All your other attacks only proc a 15% slow.
  
• 3. Clairvoyance is actually so overrated at the moment it is not even funny. You should be taking Heal, do not let anyone convince you it is for noobs. Either take flash and heal, or cv and heal if you feel really comfy that you won’t get in a bad position.
  
• 4. I do not advise you get zhonya’s hourglass, but rather something that actually helps your team. Something like Will of the Ancients, zeke’s herald, or randuin’s omen. They are all great choices, but it is better to help your team, instead of getting a bit more damage off, and surviving 2 more seconds, when they aren’t going to be focusing you anyways, rather your AP Carry/ AD Carry.
  
• 5. Your masteries look REALLY funny. 4% cdr and 4 ap isn’t worth 8 points if you don’t take the 10% magic penetration. and the 30 health in the defense tree is a must. Most supports go deep into the utility tree for the fact that it gives you more gold, due to lack of farm. And more heals/flashes/cvs from 15% cdr on ss. You need a serious rework on your masteries.
  
• 6. That is really all I have to say, except you may want to fix up your coding a bit to make it look neater. Its coded correctly, just doesn't look too good.

Hope I helped! Good luck!

Very in-depth and well thought out! Well done.

Oh Giant I said that in my last post I would change how it is viewed. And I said in the guide I am not sure about ad items, though situations may change. If you have a lot of hp, lets say 4000, that would be 80 damage. That is a very good amount, especially with his passive. It is an option, to use Atma's, though rarely should be chosen. I will now add this to the guide so THANK YOU FOR TELLING THIS :D

U suggest decent items, but you might want to make the way you display them different. Like what are the starting items? What do you buy the first time you go back? Right now the item part is not that inviting to read. I'm also missing a skill explanation section and a how to lane with carrotaric section.
Nothing wrong with the information that is in the guide except maby for suggesting atma's on a support.

A problem someone has told me is that the build I put at the top is no good, though you should read the guide altogether, I will change it today. Thank you Chubby.

+1 good guide

decent outline overall, though i think the guide could use some extra large pictures. also remember to turn on require comment to vote!

keep up the good work!

pretty guide. kinda interesting. i like mine better.