Ya same sorta thing as what the last 2 said. Coding helps people understand a lot better. Also, i think you should put pros/cons section near the start of the guide instead of at the end. I have a xin guide too so u can look at that and see if you can find any useful information from it if u want. Although im not really an expert on guide making so maybe one of the higher rated xin guides would be better to look at :P

From what i see, there is a lot of improvement that can be made, as this is your first build you made i think the comment top can be really useful for the guide readers to understand what exactly do you mean, i will vote you for this guide just because i want other people to see this guide and just vote for you !

Have fun!

Hey, I can tell you're new to Mobafire and I'm gonna let you in on something cool: if you encase names of abilities, items, etc. in double brackets it'll show a tooltip like so Audacious Charge. That helps people a lot when reading your guide so they can get exact info, negating the necessity of typing that out for you. Also you can use the code "icon=xin zhao size=xx" encased in single brackets to make the little tooltip appear over a picture of the item, ability, champion, etc.

Anyway on to your build: This is a stron carry build but it lacks survivability, and for Xin Zhao Guardian Angel is not enough. Unfortunately (and I hate this about most melee bruisers) Xin scales off late game just like Renekton and a few others I can't think of now, and at that stage of the game if you don't build tankier, you won't survive your first charge onto an enemy. What you should really focus on here is a tanky-dps anti-carry role with perhaps a Trinity Force, Black Cleaver, and then tanky items after that like Randuin's Omen is perfect because he's in the middle of the fight, or Frozen Heart for the same aforementioned reason. Also Mercury's Treads might prove very useful, more so than the Zerks greaves because you'll have plenty of AS from triforce and black cleaver, your only necessary dps items.

But I'm gonna +1 you because I see room for improvement, and because I like Xin Zhao, he's underplayed. PM me if you have any other questions or want advice on coding/writing in general. I'm always happy to help.

Nice.