I think you should rethink your Match-ups section, as i think you guessed on some of them. Nasus is an incredibly easy lane, he's so weak early game you can deny him cs like your a wall. He's not a strong counter in any way, i dont see how you could lose to him unless you let him farm his Q, and even then, hiten stlye shuts him down as your true damage is far more consistant then one Q every 7 seconds.
Riven is also a rather easy lane, just farm safley, and she cant do anything to you, also, you may want to think about this: riven needs to use her abilitys to close the gap, she also needs to use those same abiitys for damage and utility, so.... why not farm from a distance (not get close to her), and let her doom herself? i just realized i made a wall of text..... sorry... EDIT: update your masteries too

I used to love this build until I figured out my own. All I know for sure is, if it wasn't for you, I'd still be maining Irelia without knowing ANYTHING. :) Thanks for your help.

Sorry, been busy with RL but, finally got around to do your request!

Spelling: 9/10

Coding: 5/10
“The masteries you use for the aggressive Offtank build. (not included in cheat-sheet because it's niche, and because 1/22/7 is more standard for Irelia” Irelia can be coded.
“Improved Ghost, and Ignite on CD now gives an extra 5 AD and AP.” Ghost and Ignite should be coded.
“Depending on the lane opponent, you'll change between 2 points in Hardiness and 2 points in Resistance.” Hardiness and Resistance can be coded.
You code one sentence then, don’t the next a lot.
“Irelia will be able to walk out of fights with this, in combination with her passive and Mercury's Treads.” Irelia and Mercury's Treads can be coded.

Visuals: 7/10
(I saw the note so, judging by what visuals/videos you have already.)

Content: 8/10
Need to add more match-ups for solo-top. Akali, Katarina, Darius, Cho'Gath, Volibear, etc.
Also, might want to mention zoning for early game. And/or some tips on last hitting with Irelia.

Chapters: 10/10

Cheat Sheet: 39/40

• Runes – 10/10
• Items - 9/10
  ‘Assassin purchase order; doesn’t have tier 2 boots.’
• Summoner Spells - 2/2
• Ability Sequence – 10/10
• Masteries – 8/8

Creativity: 7/10

Improvements:

• Need to clean up the BBCoding.
• Add more match-ups.
• Maybe more visuals but, it looks good as is.
• Maybe talk about early-game farming/zoning for newer players.

Overall Score: 85/100

I've just tryed this guide and got very good score. I think irelia even after her nerf is very good but not so much op :)

I'm just like you BlackIceT. Trinity Force all day! xD

You beat me to the review, so imma just add my own short opinion:

Yea, pics don't show for me either for Pros / Cons, swap them for these two:

[[icon=Brute Force size=50]]




[[icon=Archaic Knowledge size=50]]




Same problem in your GP/10 chapter

I think that Irelia would be much stronger as a Trinity Force Off-Tank. Your build already has a ton load of health, your resistances are good, but you want to get off decent damage still. Trinity Force will keep this going for you because your Bladesurge procs it, giving a lot more damage to it.

Everything else is explained wonderfully. Check out my guide if you want to as well ^^~

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~Xeronn

Lol, I thought I had purged all traces of that rune from my guide, even though it was in the most obvious of places.

Review above

Hey,

I am a reviewer from JhoiJhoi's Review Shop. For my review, I would like you to check out my Fiora or Wukong guide. Also feel free to +rep me :D

For starters I like your 2 builds however for my personal preference I prefer the second build with Trinity Force. That is mainly because I am a Trinity Force nut haha.

- Your pros and cons pictures do not appear. I do not know if it is just my computer or not but I figured I would mention it.

- Your Summoner Spells section looks a little bit awkward. I do not believe that you have enough info to make the formatting that you have look nice. I think that you should either add more information or change of your layout.

- Quite frankly I do not find the Greater Mark of Scaling Attack Damage to be very valuable. Since you say that Irelia has a weak game which she does you would need all the help you could get early game so I personally feel that Greater Mark of Attack Damage would benefit you the most.

- You mention that taking Equilibrium Strike at level 1 or 2 will help save you from ganks early. Maybe you should give examples of junglers who would try to gank you at level 2 because some junglers can't/won't do that.

- I really cannot point out anything else that deserves a comment from me. This guide is exceptional in terms of information and quality. You have clearly spent a lot of time in this guide and it shows. This deserves a spot in the top 3 for Irelia no questions asked.

Here are my scores for your guide:

Quality: 5/5: This guide shows that you have great knowledge of Irelia and that this guide was written to try and teach people how to play Irelia properly. Therefore perfect score in this category.

Information: 5/5: The information in this guide is absolutely fantastic. You should add the junglers that gank at level 2 to make it even better.

Visuals: 4.5/5: I understand that you do not need to have visual in the guide and the guide for the most part looks ok but when you start getting into dishing out a lot of information without a break in-between it starts to get tough to concentrate on all the text. Maybe find a way to include some pictures or a way to break up the text a little bit.

Grammar: 5/5: I did not notice any severe grammar mistakes and your information was typed out in a professional manner.

So your final score is 19.5/20 which is pretty damn good. I love to play Irelia she was my first 6300 champ and my most reliable champ from levels 15-30 (before I discovered Wukong, which you need to add to your champs list). I still play her from time to time and I will definitely be using this guide.

As I said please look at either of my guides and I hope that my review was helpful to you in at least one way. Good luck to your guide!

BlackIceT

I do make a note about switching out Wit's for Trinity once the build is done, but you should rarely reach that point.

Nice Guide.
Angel Beats?
Plus I have a very similar build like yours, but towards late game I switch out wits end for trinity force and it proves to be effective with her late game with the off tank build. Sometimes those that passive from sheen can help save lives or get a kill before getting killed.

nice!

Nice build, it dominates top and it is really easy to get farmed. The cloth armor and hp pots in the beginning works extremely well. Wits end is a nice touch.