I like the build but i think you need to work more on the guide is a wall of text.

I've updated my build now :) if you have any further advice for me feel free to comment, thanks for the help :)

Ok, I haven't played Talon much, but I do know that Bloodthirsters give the best AD and LS at full stacks - i.e. 100 AD and 25% LS. For 3000 gold each that's not too bad. So for 9000 gold(and 40 minion kills), you will be hitting an extra 300 AD, and therefore healing 225 health each hit - not including the AD from other items.

I'm not a hater or anything, just a devil's advocate ;P

Ima overview your guide. Lets see..You have 5 AD items, and mercury treads. Hm, in my opinion, stacking Bloodthirster is a ******* waste of money. Thats the 1st thing.

2nd, you need to read Jai's Making a guide - Guide. It will help you a LOT when creating guides, because its pretty boring to read giant walls of text. At least it is for me. I like your good behaviour and attitude, keep it.

3rd, Why dont you put in some..some build that isn't so ordinary, like Boots Inf Trinity Banshee Phantom dancer+Guardian angel? I mean, at the 1st look its sucky to see that some1 is stacking items :\

Anyway, fix those and you got a vote. Peace :)