a little thank you before i start reviewing your guide, for reviewing mine!

First of i would advice you to get your guide looked over grammatically, there was a few mistakes, specially in the introduction part, where i believe you where just writing a little too fast.

Besides that, i really recommend getting some more information into your sections, and explain it more troughout. i also recommend you use alot of pictures, colours and what not, to make everything seem exciting and explosive, as it keeps the interest up, for at least not so experienced players.

You should also get the champions name into your guide, though that's just a matter of opinion.
the build you have added, seems pretty decent, i sadly just can't try it out, since i don't own the champion, though it looks kinda like what i ran when he was free to play.

You've done a alright job, though there's a bit more work on it, and i'm sure you're not done yet even as i write this! :)

- Aletoria from the Draven guide