Thanks for the link. but I'll probably wait until the new season 3 items before I change my guide considering it is going to completely change what items I buy on him. As far as black cleaver, that is something I am messing around with. I didn't mention a lot of stuff that I should have because this is something I am going to build up on. I probably should have waited to post it until it was a finished product, I might take it down and repost with a much more detailed build. Thanks for the feedback though, I really appreciate it.

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506 - if you haven't already read this, you should.

Your guide is messy and unclear. You mentioned Heart of Gold in it, but it doesn't show up in your final build. I don't exactly like your build either, Atmogs + Black Cleaver is definitely suboptimal given that the bulk of Hecarim's damage comes from his Q rather than autoattacks.

Yea, I kinda need help with the BBcoding, could you point me in the right direction for a video guide or something like that? Would appreciate it.

Good start for a guide. Your build is reasonable - not much to criticize there. Try to add some BBcoding for pretty pictures and stuff - improves guides by a lot and makes them more enjoyable to read. +1 for now - keep at it! :)