i just carried a game with this item build (only items) i took 9/21/0 masteries and armor seals / mpen marks / ap quints / ap per/lvl flats

Thanks a lot! I'll revise it now.

:) Better at least

Listen to devdevil, that's your first step.

Besides, it's a lot more effort to type icon=xxx size=xxx than just type the name and bracket it right?

I see that you use icons instead of the names.
That can be confusing and somewhat annoying for readers.

For example:

I like using because she has , , , and for tons of AoE!

Or:

I like using Lux because she has Light Binding, Prismatic Barrier, Lucent Singularity, and Final Spark for tons of AoE!


So basically it's easy on the eyes, and shorter for you! It can also be confusing when you alternate between names and icons :O

As for the masteries go, I went with what Diamondprox uses. I believe that points in Brute Force would help you more than Archmage in the early game. As I said in the guide, the itemization and masteries are mostly based on what many of the pros are building when jungling Eve.

In any case, thanks a LOT for the comments guys. This is my first guide and I appreciate all of the criticisms I can get :)

-1 for wrongly specced masteries.

Okay, so the coding and structure of this guide needs some work. the build is ok, though Im not sure if its entirely optimal (just an opinion really). Have to ask why you take points in Brute Force when you could put them into Archmage ?