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First of all, I want to mention the positives about this guide. The overall build/runes/masteries etc. seems viable to me (though I love movespeed quints everywhere^^). I also really like the coding (custom table of contents :o) and so on, shows that you know how to write a guide (Yet you should fix that eyeburn color everywhere - just make it plain white and highlight important facts with color).
Next, I will list anything in your guide that I would change or rework (your quotes are marked grey, my recommendations are white, everything is in the order of the guide):
As you can see, I mostly corrected grammar or spelling mistakes. I might not have found all of them, but as I have some fetish for this, I think I found most things. For the content, I agree to most of the written stuff or I don't think I have the qualification to make better recommendations, as I have barely any ranked experience with
One more thing that I should mention: This comment is in no way meant to be insulting because I list your grammar mistakes. It is meant as a help for you to make your guide easier to read, which is a good thing after all, isn't it? And who knows? Maybe it even improved your English skills permanently (e.g. your obsession with could and would even without if-clauses)? I would greatly accept any blame for being perfectionist :).
Overall, my credits to the effort put in that guide - well done, +1 (fix the listed mistakes, though)!
That baron art just takes up space, not a necessity.
"A few endings word" ---> correct grammar is, "A Few ending Words".
The team that got the ace will like basically win the game. Not true in the slightest, and that is an incorrect sentence.
Try not the die ----> Try not TO die
The whole team could easily takes down them ----> take them down.
It's everyone'S responsibility.
Also, in the abilities section, I think you should put the copied ability things in a spoiler, as it makes it look really messy.
But I like everything else so +1
+1.
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I cant really say anything, except you need to change your colors. It may confuse people abit, and makes it weird to read. :)