Ad tf isnt as good since your wild cards are pretty useless but good job

i think instead of Youmuu's Ghostblade u should get frozen cuz of the slow and health

beaker: I see that you wrote a guide on TF as well, I'll try that one out some time ;)

Take Madreds, drop the Infinity and the Ghostblade, get lifesteal earlier, take ghost, get that point out of the extra damage to minions thing and get a Frozen Mallet or another form of health/durability and you're much closer to what you want.

nice build, when i play tf as ad i use a very similar build and it works great. (i put infinity edge last) i prefer to play him as/support

wriggly => as boots => phage => bloodrazor => nashor's tooth => frozen mallet => SotD => sell wriggly for bloodthirster

masteries 9/0/21
runes as marks, mana regen/lvl seals, as glyphs, flat hp quints
summoner spells teleport and exhaust

more of a support build than a carry with the lower damage spam stun and auto attack slow.

you want constructive criticism? Stop using AD TF.