You need to look at the BB Coding guide. This guide is all over the place. Take time to go through each step and explain everything thoroughly. Also, having a Doran's Blade (<-- OMG BB CODING) in your final build is a big no-no.
You need to think this through instead of posting a random guide that looks bad for Garen mains who produce good guides and play well.

PM if you have questions or need help with the guide.

~GL

Bro...what is this formatting...? Honestly, I've never seen a more poorly organized guide and you have little to no BB coding. A separate chapter for each skill? Are you nuts? Also your skill order....item build...etc. Just makes me want to cry! You don't need a lore or stats section, seriously? What confuses me the most is your grammar and sentence structure is rather good....which means you're just lazy, not stupid. Don't publish a half-***ed guide please. It wastes my time and others.