IS IT BETTER NOW IM SRY IM NOT VERY FAMILIAR WITH THIS

Where to start....
You describe everything like !"OMG I DEALS SO MUCH DAMAGE" If you get what i mean, its quite painful to read.

The guide itself is very badly detailed, there is almost no other information than "derp, he is ranged... derp!"

Your grammar is fine... well... its readable (like mine)

And why the giant icons? why not place the items in a row. The way they are now, is just plain stupid.

The items is fine, but why build defense that late? if your face rolling, the why stop?
if you need defense, build a solid item like a banshee veil.
Frozen mallet is a poor defensive item.

The most important mistake about your guide is DETAIL! this ... lacks... DETAIL

You do not even tell us WHY you use these items! there is no description on your runes! AND the summation on your summoner spells is far from good.

Thing of it as the same way you describe a picture, you cant just say:
" I use the color red because red is pretty"
you have to be more in-depth, like:
"I use the color red to express my feelings of hate and anger trough a modern media"

detail-detail-detail.

That is what this Guide lacks.... and a good layout.

Btw: adding last whisper at the END of your build.... do not make it an anti-tank build...

TROLL ALERT!! and this is the best part "Dont like what i said about your guide/build? oh poor you... cry me a river." omg do you just have a mobafire acc to troll over some guy build??!! This is made to help people to learn how to play on a champ! Not for u to say that you dont like how he putted some pictures in a row!! This is a nice build! but ofc there is you to destroy it to little peaces... btw 30/2/6 with this build!