Thanks for the advice, Raven. I'll attempt a major rewrite shortly.

i found this to be filled with rather basic knowledge versus something someone would read to advance their skills at the game.

i found it riddled with many explanations of simple things... for example terminology. if someone does not know what the word cc means or the role of a carry is they should be looking at a guide for novice/beginner players.

with that in mind, reading through the guide was painful. there is good information in there but it is nestled in with all of this beginner concepts that it is very hard to find.

i suggest two things:
1. as you would imagine, drop all of the beginner things. this is needless clutter. when writing any piece of reference material keep in mind why your reader is looking at the piece. if im writing a guide to jungle alistar is there really any reason for me to add in parts about his laning phase? no. because its a jungle ali guide.

2. the guide is not pleasant to look at. pretty colors, pictures, icons... all of these things enhance attention and put emphasis on parts that you find important. adding in that much isnt complex at all! looking up a guide for adding coding would be a great idea.

I hope with this bit of help you will be able to massively improve your guide and learn a good bit in the process

Okay, thanks.

I have just quicke checked first few colored chapters and its nice. I can imagine whole guide like this to be pleasant for reader. Finish it up!

Please, link away! I'm in the process of adding colour.... tell me what you think of the first few sections, is it too much? not enough?

This is one of the longest guides I have ever read. Its awesome, if just every single player keep things like this in his/her head, LoL would be an awesome place, but...

However, let me point out few things:

1) I suggest to turn on Comment to Vote in guide setup.

2) It is pretty easy to say "add some coding" like in the comments above me, but personaly...I dont see a point in it. This guide is FULL of informations, not just some talking about nothing. You can add some icons (i.e. when you naming some champions or items), maybe some colors to highlight the most important things.

3) With your permission, I would like to put link into my Jax guide for this guide. Im planning some "usefull links" section.

4) +1 and +rep from me, keep it up. GJ!

Yea and icons and images

hmm.... ok, I'll try to add some coding. Do you guys mean like, bolding and colours and stuff?

Nice but needs a lot of coding, it looks so boring, and if you use some more coding it will be more fun to read but the guide explain a lot of different things and is very detailed.

I will come back later for a possible vote but you have do some more coding.

Good guide, but needs some coding.