Giant Wall of Text. I will downvote it for now, but if you PM me saying its changed, i will take a look and might change my decision.

what the.... try to make it more appealing

Giant text of wall

Not reading it

Look at jhoijhoi How to make a guide

And in addition I find your build lacking many things

Not going to vote for now work on it

You should read the 'getting started guide'.This is just a giant wall of text which a lot of people will not read.

Giant wall of text, OVERLOAD AHHHHH *brain exlosion*

Buuuuut, there is some decent information in there, just try to make it look easier on the eyes and more presentable.