No problem. To work on guide you will need many time. Focus on twitch build? Try to finish Dominion Panth first. Try to read jhoijhoi guide "Making a guide", and other her guides.
Thanks for rep.

Thanks for replying! Anyway, I will try to find some time to add text and stuff. Thanks for your feedback, as now the build is better. Although now my focus is on my new twitch build, i will work on this as well.
Btw, +rep'd you

Now guide is better, but it need some text. Depend, why players should upgrade Heartseeker Strike first, why we need Lich BAne, Boots of Mobility (I know, just type in guide about this, to novice players). Show alternate masteries and runes, summoner spells. Say, how to use spells, to do kills and capture easily, when stun, how to use ult, how to finish with Spear Shot etc. You can show alternate item idea like: If you need to always slow enemies, easily run and charge them, need more HP, don't AD or AP, you should buy Frozen Mallet instead Entropy. What pick first for Entropy: Phage or B.F.. Say about this in this guide. Don't say: pick only bottom lane, Say: Best lane is bottom. You must play Defensive, gaining EXP and Gold. Also you can go top and... You can add text about masteries, runes, spells description.

LOL... How you get Arcane Knowledge without Sorcecy?(masteries). Runic affinity? (I know, that this mastery useful for junglers, fighters, some other champs in Summoner Rift... but dont for Panth in dominion.).