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Creator: RubenDefo December 15, 2011 10:02pm
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Well, I introduced myself in another post, so now it´s time to show my work.
I´ve done this artwork for a brochure that I have to design for an assessment that I´m doing about an event. The reason why the bottom of the image has no work at all is because I´m going to but a black box there with information about the event that I´m doing. I tried to get a sensation of depth, i don´t know if I achieve it. Feedback is more than welcome!!




Hope you guys like it!

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Too messy, there's no depth or focal point (my eyes are looking everywhere) there isn't much flow and there isn't a lightsource try adding some effects not just brushes.
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Nice clipping masks, there is some depth and focus here though, hence the blur.

I like it.
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The depth doesn't work, there are no solid objects anywhere to give it a decent sense of depth, also the focus is taken away by the over sharpened clipping masks.
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I like it a lot.

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All the feedback is welcome. And all the opinions are respected.
I agree that some parts of the image are over sharpened. Also, in my defense I will say that the image quality is in 50%, cause it was too heavy....ah, and it´s not just a couple of brushes...xD.

Thanks for the feedback.

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Like it alot :) Great job on the blade
+Rep me Plz!!/Thanks to the GrandMasterD, Xiaowiriamu, Missmaw, LaCorpse, The_Nameless_Bard, Spooon and Myself for the Sigs!!

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