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Tips on my Talon Signature!

Creator: Dzzyy
October 24, 2012 5:46pm
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Dzzyy » October 24, 2012 5:46pm | Report

Dadadada, lets skip the unnecessary conversation.. and get straight to the signature.




Haven't done any gfx in a LONG time, but just decided to start again with LoL champs because well, they look pretty epic. Well heres.. Talon!

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Dzzyy » October 24, 2012 9:37pm | Report
Need advice x:
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by GrandmasterD » October 24, 2012 9:39pm | Report
Overall I like the style of it but I think it could use a border. Also I'd make the lighting a little less bright and the text is, well, incredibly hard to read.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by zgvariant » October 24, 2012 9:40pm | Report
The render looks kind of pixelated but thats not really your fault. Also the text gets lost pretty easily as it is almost identical in color to that portion of the background. Ummm... I'd work on text placement/color and image effects (try to add a cool edge to the image as a whole). Overall though, I like it. Fix the small stuff and you'll have a pretty cool signature.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Dynasty » October 25, 2012 12:24pm | Report
I think it looks cool!

Maybe a bit bright in some places

and the text kind of does get lost.

But it looks good!
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Dzzyy » October 25, 2012 5:27pm | Report
Thank you all for your opinions! I'll try to incorporate all that you've said on my next one! (:
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Minho » October 25, 2012 7:28pm | Report
You can tone down the lighting of the render. Make the text visible. Also, try and make the text next to the focal point, which is in this case, obviously, Talon.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by TinyStar » October 25, 2012 7:46pm | Report
I like it :3 just fix the text and lighting(:
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