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Janitsu's Review Café

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Janitsu
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Welcome to my Review Café Thread!
You can request for a request from a Platinum I player who has done many reviews in the past!



What I offer

What I basically offer is a review about your guide which includes structure, viability, readability and content. I will judge it and write a long *** review* about it and how you could make it better. I will ALWAYS vote if I think it is needed or deserved. I will not listen to any: "omfg y u don downvotein my gaid it was no finished jet and u suk wery hart". NO. **** your ******** about you getting downvoted because of VALIDPOINT X. If you disagree you write me an essay which will make me understand why you for example choose to take Sword of the Occult on Lux in lieu of Rabadon's Deathcap. If you are being a whiny little guy I will also - Scout vote it as well. It's not about the votes. It's about sending a message.

Currently (and probably in the future as well) I only have two different formats. The names are inspired by Samuel L. Jackson. They are:

**********ing List of the **********ing Good, the **********ing Bad and the **********ing Ugly
  • This is a review in which I will list the good points and the bad points. I will then give you examples of how to change it.


**********ing Long **********ing Essay
  • I will write a long *** review about your guide in which I will(try to) be clear and tell you why your guide sucks/rocks/socks



Requesting A Review

Leave me a link and explain about your guide a bit. Also tell me which review you want.
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Meiyjhe approves
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First customer! Meiyjhe doesn't count :P

Anyways

Summoner level: 18, no I am not new, this is a smurf
Champion: Sejuani yaaay
I have read that so much I even thanked her at the end of the guide
The review I want: Bily. Give me overall viability, spelling, graphics, etc etc. Give me your honest opinion, flaws and mistakes and everything
Link: Is also in my sig

Thank you very much, hope to hear from you soon :)
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Do you also review strategy blogs? :3

If so - please check my blog out, I'm looking for some expert feedback on this :)
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Vynertje, you mean the one that is in your sig :D?

Thanks to OwenTheAwesomer for the signature =)
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Yeah ;-)

Basically I am looking for suggestions on what to improve on or add for future blogs.
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Okay, I'll do basic later this day then :p (It's just "Thy Blessings" and "Thy Sins" :p)
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My summoner level: 30
Champion the guide is about: Pantheon
I have read jhoijhoi's guide about making a guide: Yes
The Review Type I want: Billy, if you have the time
Link to the Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-complete-mid-lane-pantheon-s3-249276
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Summoner Level 30
Champion: Skarner
Have I read jhoijhoi's guide about making a guide: Yes
Review Type: I want to understand why it doesn't have a higher rating.
Link: It is in my signature.
If you found my advice useful, then check out some of my guides!


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Xylarboden wrote:

My summoner level: 30
Champion the guide is about: Pantheon
I have read jhoijhoi's guide about making a guide: Yes
The Review Type I want: Billy, if you have the time
Link to the Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-complete-mid-lane-pantheon-s3-249276



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