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Creator: Janitsu June 22, 2013 2:21pm
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My summoner level: 30
Champion the guide is about: Diana
I have read jhoijhoi's guide about making a guide: Yes
The Review Type I want: As advanced as possible! I already put a lot of effort in my guide and want to improve it as much as possible. That's why I Need some criticism. I know my guide has already reached a high score but I'm pretty sure I can still make it better. :D
Link to the Guide: Click me I'm a link!
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Summoner Level: Obviously 30...
Champion: Zilean (mid lane)
Read Jhoijhoi's making a guide many times, while I was writing it.
Review type: Wanna know whether you understand what kind of champion Zilean is and how he should be played by reading the guide, as well as your opinion about the build. At last, state where your think I can improve.
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Summoner Level: Level 30!
Champion: Support Zyra
One does not simply make a guide without reading Jhoihoi's Karthus Guide.
Review type: Billy

  • How is my overall choice of item (albeit, some being expensive like Zhonya's Hourglass, but I find it situational sometimes in very late game, and other items derived from Burning Bush variant)?
  • How could my Gameplay section improve other than posting up my games (as LoLReplay or other type of Replay System does not work on my 18th Century Computer)?
  • How can I improve this guide's teach-ability (I am aspiring to be a teacher. I need to know this!)?
  • Help with combining multiple pictures into one... and still keeping their URL T_T Searched up in Google and still could not find it! ):(I need that for Custom ToC!)

Link to the guide: My Guide to Zyra

Current project: But the Music Goes On - Autobiography of Sona
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My summoner level: 30
Champion the guide is about: Diana
I have read jhoijhoi's guide about making a guide: Yes
The Review Type I want: As advanced as possible! I already put a lot of effort in my guide and want to improve it as much as possible. That's why I Need some criticism. I know my guide has already reached a high score but I'm pretty sure I can still make it better. :D
Link to the Guide: Click me I'm a link!



Done.
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My summoner level: 30
Champion the guide is about: Ahri
I have read jhoijhoi's guide about making a guide: Yes
The Review Type I want: Billy: Would be cool to get some informations overall. Coding, formatting spelling etc. It´s my first guide also.
Link to the Guide: Click here

Check out my Ahri Guide Hit Charm keep Calm HERE • Thanks to Aquilegia for creating this signature :)
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My summoner level: 30
Champion the guide is about: Ahri
I have read jhoijhoi's guide about making a guide: Of course
The Review Type I want: Billy preferably
Link to the Guide: Ahri guidE here
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My Ahri guide :)
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Summoner Level: Level 30!
Champion: Support Zyra
One does not simply make a guide without reading Jhoihoi's Karthus Guide.
Review type: Billy

  • How is my overall choice of item (albeit, some being expensive like Zhonya's Hourglass, but I find it situational sometimes in very late game, and other items derived from Burning Bush variant)?
  • How could my Gameplay section improve other than posting up my games (as LoLReplay or other type of Replay System does not work on my 18th Century Computer)?
  • How can I improve this guide's teach-ability (I am aspiring to be a teacher. I need to know this!)?
  • Help with combining multiple pictures into one... and still keeping their URL T_T Searched up in Google and still could not find it! ):(I need that for Custom ToC!)

Link to the guide: My Guide to Zyra




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banji wrote:

My summoner level: 30
Champion the guide is about: Ahri
I have read jhoijhoi's guide about making a guide: Yes
The Review Type I want: Billy: Would be cool to get some informations overall. Coding, formatting spelling etc. It´s my first guide also.
Link to the Guide: Click here




Done.
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Can you take a look at my Lux guide, just a basic review, nothing too long, I have read Jhoi's guide and I am level 30. link in sig or here
If I have helped in anyway at all a +rep will be appreciated lots
Thanks to LaCorpse, Hogopogo and JhoiJhoi for the amazing sigs
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Derp level: 30
Champion: Lulu
I have read jhoihoi's stuff back in the past
Why: I want overall review of contents mainly.


http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lulu-guide-she-is-a-support-344498

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