What do you think of this poem that i made for...

[quote=ladiesman17][b][u]My Everything[/u][/b] You are the laughter in my sorrow. The tears in my woe. The smile in every glee The moan in misery The contentment in every joy. The misery in every throe. You are the love in my heart. The hatred in every grudge. The spirit for my soul, The body for my bones. The truth that I believe. ‘The lies that I secede.[/quote]

[quote=PotatisFarfar]Ladiesman17... wanna marry me? <3[/quote]

[quote=ladiesman17]haha, ill think about it[/quote]

[quote=Alahric][quote="ladiesman17"] [b][u]My Everything[/u][/b] You are the cause of my sorrow. The tears in my cry. The wee in every glee. The joy in misery. The ice that's made slipery. The misery in every toe. You are the fatness in my heart. The hatred in every grudge. The spirit for my soulstone, The body for my boner. The truth that I keed. 'The bitchlover that I need! [/quote] Fixed![/quote]

[quote=ladiesman17]wait is that you're version or a version online? no offense but i like mines better ^_^[/quote]

[quote=AnalSamurai]Lol I think it was a joke dude.... I don't like the last line of the first stanza because "misery" was already used.[/quote]

[quote=Quick Kill]This is amazing, I wish I could write poems like that! Keep up the good work![/quote]

[quote=ladiesman17]i actually told the person i wrote this for that i love them >_<[/quote]

[quote=Alahric]You are the ladies man after all, and yes it was a joke -> I got bored ^ ^,[/quote]