[Concept] Kendrich, Icathia's Secret

[quote=BlueArtist][i][color=#ff0000]I just thought that Icathia needs something to it. It is a place that actually has a lot of story-telling potential to it and with its mysterious nature I am surprised not many champions or lore has been linked to this place.[/color][/i] [center][h1]Kendrich, Icathia's Secret[/h1][/center] [center]Mage[/center] [Spoiler=Lore] [color=#00ff00]The empire of Icathia was once a bustling, thriving city. Stretched across the Southern half of Valoran, the lone city was barricaded from the outside world. In their thrive for supremacy, Icathia was connected to another dimension of the world - The Void. Unbeknownst to the outside world, the Icathian mages opened a portal to the void, and with it came a great, unimaginable source of energy that the Icathians harnessed to fuel their research. In one of these research facilities worked Kendrich.[/color] [color=#00ff00][/color] [color=#00ff00]Kendrich was a gifted mage. Since young, he felt a connection to a mystic, dark and perilous dimension. Leading a group of mages in an utmost secrecy research, he seeks to connect and communicate with the dwellers of the Void. On one such day, Kendrich established connection with the Void. A silhouette loomed in the darkness, and it was terrifying. The creature emerged. Clad in a mask, its body was positioned in a grotesque angle and its heavy breathing and sharp claws drove several researchers mad at the sight of it. Incredulously, Kendrich did not panic, but instead felt a power beckoning to him. As he was reaching out to speak to the masked being within the Void, a sudden power drew Kendrich into the Void. The last thing he saw through the void was numerous grimacing creatures surging into the facility, slaughtering the horrified mages. Kendrich himself was trapped within the Void as he helplessly watched the creatures cut down everything alive.[/color] [color=#00ff00][/color] [color=#00ff00]When Kendrich awoke, he was lying in the midst of a ruined, battered city. The once glorious Icanthia lay in ruins, with all of its inhabitants vanished without a trace. That was not the worst; not only did his past vanished, his future was altered forever. He was enclosed in an inseparable suit, granting him the power to manipulate the energy of the void, at the expense of his appearance. His face was not of a human, twisted and altered. His voice was dark and mystifying, and where his legs were shrunken and withered. Full of despair, Kendrich set on an aimless journey to recover everything he lost and to find out who he had established connection with that fateful day. He wanted to punish the ones who destroyed his life and avenge the fallen city of Icathia.[/color] [color=#00ff00][/color] [/spoiler] [center][h1][color=#00ffff]Base Stats[/color][/h1][/center] [center]Health: 420(+68)[/center] [center]Health Regen: 0.9(+0.12)[/center] [center]Armor: 10(+3.0)[/center] [center]Magic Resist: 31(+0)[/center] [rule] [center]Damage: 54(+3)[/center] [center]Attack Speed: 0.61(+1.43%)[/center] [rule] [center]Mana: 240(+50)[/center] [center]Mana Regen: 1.5(+0.14)[/center] [rule] [center][h1][color=#00ffff]Abilities[/color][/h1][/center] [center][icon=Arcane Mastery size=40][/center] [center][color=#ff0000][size=34]Passive: Void Empowered[/size][/color][/center] [center] [color=#ffff00]Everytime Kendrich kills an unit, the unit is consumed by the Void. The energy then strengthens Kendrich, granting him 1/2/3 stacks of Void Faculty. At 50/200/300 stacks, Kendrich gains 10 Mana Regeneration, 20% Cooldown Reduction and 20% Bonus Ability Power respectively.[/color][/center] [rule] [center][icon=Death Ray size=40][/center] [center][color=#ff0000][size=34]Q: Scorching Vigor[/size][/color][/center] [center][color=#ffff00]Kendrich draws in and concentrates the power of the Void, blasting it at enemies in a straight line, dealing 60/80/140/180/260 initial magic damage, and then burns the enemy, dealing 20/40/65/80/100 physical damage over a period of 4 seconds. [/color][/center] [center]Cooldown: 9/8/7/6/5 seconds[/center] [center]Mana cost: 80/85/90/100/110[/center] [rule] [center][icon=Transcendent size=40][/center] [center][color=#ff0000][size=34]W: Excessive Power[/size][/color][/center] [center][color=#ffff00]Passive: Kendrich gains 4%/6/%10% movement speed each time his spells hit an enemy. Effect stacks up to 2 times, lasting 2 seconds each. [/color][/center] [center][color=#ffff00]Active: Kendrich gains 12%/18%/30% movement speed for 3 seconds. While the skill is on cooldown, Kendrich loses his passive bonus. Every champion kill reduces the skill's cooldown to 2 seconds.[/color][/center] [center]Cooldown: 14/12/10/9/8 seconds[/center] [center]Mana cost: No Cost[/center] [rule] [center][icon=Void Stone size=40][/center] [center][color=#ff0000][size=34]E: Erupting Flames[/size][/color][/center] [center][color=#ffff00]Kendrich blasts a target, dealing 50/60/70/85/100 magic damage and slowing the enemy for 5/8/12/18/25%. If the target is burning, the flames will be consumed and in turn deal an extra 20/30/40/50/60 magic damage, plus the maximum burn damage. [/color][/center] [center]Cooldown: 10/9/8/7/6 seconds[/center] [center]Mana cost: 50/65/80/90/95[/center] [rule] [center][icon=Tectonic Disruption size=40][/center] [center][color=#ff0000][size=34]Ultimate: Forbidding Rupture[/size][/color][/center] [center][color=#ffff00]Kendrich focuses and channels for one second, opening a portal to the void on a targeted area which gradually spreads outwards and widens on the ground, slowing all enemies in the area. After 1.5 second, the void closes, stunning and dealing 200/350/500 damage to all enemies still in the area.[/color][/center] [center]Cooldown: 100/80/60 seconds[/center] [center]Mana cost: 100[/center] [rule][/quote]

[quote=Jimmydoggga 2.0]You cant slow someone by less than 10% at any rank and expect it to do something. If anything 25% could be the level 1 slow.[/quote]

[quote=TheKut]I feel like you've just taken the abilities from other LoL champions and put them together. Also, why did you make the burn from Q as physical damage? That doesn't make sense.[/quote]

[quote=Latest Legend]I think the lore is great. I think the fact that he sets off "full of despair" is a bit weird though, why would he have such a clear goal in mind if he's desperate? Why is he desperate?[/quote]

[quote=DaRealWario]Plus "Scorching Vigor" has too short of a cooldown considering the bonus DoT, which means you can burn a champion forever. I might make it a fixed 10s cooldown and switch the magic damage to 60/95/130/165/200 (+50% AP). [Don't listen to me at this point BUT THE WEIRD BASE DAMAGE INCREMENTS HURTS MY OCD SIDE SO MUCH][/quote]