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Rosemary, The lost soul

Creator: devdevil October 17, 2012 8:47pm
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Hello fellow summoner!
Upon discovering this new place called The Shadow Isles, I thought of a champion to help introduce this land.
Rosemary's story is a sad one, but you'll read that later. What she wears is only taters, and she's the saddest ghost you'll ever find with long flowing black hair and a dirty face. She doesn't hold anything but her sorrow, because sadness can be a dangerous thing when used upon others. She is an mage, but might be built as an AD champion I think. Changes I make are done in yellow!

Abilities:

Sweet Sorrow (Passive)
Rosemary remembers her dreadful past whenever hit, giving her +10% Ability Power for every 50% of her health taken away for seven seconds. This stacks up to five times.

Screech (Q)
Letting out a high pitched wail, Rosemary deals 50/90/130/170/200 (+30% of Ability Power and +1.0 per attack damage) physical damage and stuns the enemy for 0.5/1/1.5/2/2.5 seconds.
Mana cost: 50/55/60/65/70
Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8
Look: Rosemary thrusts her head towards the target and screams.
Sound: Screaming (Of course)

Ghost Walk (W)
Rosemary gets +20/30/40/50/60% increased movement speed for 4/5/6/7/8 seconds and ignores unit collision.
Look: Mist emerges from below Rosemary and trails behind her.
Sound: A wooshing noise

Sharing the pain (E)
Rosemary shows target enemy the memories she has had, dealing 70/100/130/160/200 (+25% of ability power and +1.0 per attack damage) over 5 seconds.
Look: A white cloud goes from Rosemary's head to target enemy.
Sound: Whispers from all of Rosemary's memories.

Painful Memory (R)
Rosemary envisions all enemies as her betrayer, feuling her hatred and revenge, fearing all enemies within the range of 1250 near Rosemary for 0.5/1/1.5 seconds and giving her +10/20/30% increased ability power and attack speed, and lowering the magic resist and armor of neardy enemies by 5/10/15% for 8 seconds.
Look: A little symbol above nearby enemies shows that they are the target of her ultimate.
Sound: Rosemary cries out in anger, or yells "BEGONE YOU DEMON!"

Rosemary's other sights and sounds:
Upon selection: Do you know what I feel? (In a sad, quiet voice)
Upon right clicking on the ground: Will it hurt?/ I shall endure the pain./ If it will help me.../ Why must I still be.../ Please have patience summoner... (All in a quiet, sad tone) Rosemary glides across the ground, bobbing up and down as she moves. When she stands still, she merely hovers and bobs up and down.
Upon right clicking on an enemy: Will they remember the pain?/ They must feel what I feel./ Some revenge at last.../ They too, must suffer./ They won't feel half of what I felt. (In an angry tone, starting quiet then rasing up) Rosemary's auto attacks are melee. She attacks like the wraiths in the jungle, lunging out with her hands.
Joke: What is a joke? I haven't heard of such a thing for so long.../ Huh?/ Why would I joke? (In a quiet, confused voice) Rosemary looks around in a confused state.
Taunt: You haven't felt half of the pain I feel everyday. (In an angry tone) She points and shakes her finger, then lowers it slowly.
Dance: She pretends to dance with a partner, like at a formal ball dance.
Laugh: She merely cries because she cannot laugh, and buries her head in her hands.
Upon death: She screams "Nooooo..." as her voice gets quieter as she curls into a ball and fades away.
Recalling: She stands on the ground and looks up at the sky.

Lore:
No one, not one person has suffered like Rosemary Lavender did. As she grew up, she soon found that her hopes of ponies and rainbows were all nothing, just dreams. So she found other ways to sute herself. Never knowing her parents, thinking that they abandoned her, and never knowing right from wrong, she lived on the streets of Noxus by stealing. But since she was too timid and shy, and unknowingly too kind hearted, she was caught. The person grabbed her by the hair and dragged her to a boat, constantly shouting and yelling in her ear. It hurt so much for Rosemary, but then the man's hand started to burn. He screamed, dropping Rosemary suddenly, and she fell with her face in her hands. The cursed her and called her a witch, but he left. Rosemary thought that she was saved. But soon they came. Witch hunters, they called themselves, they wore gloves while they dragged her and beat her to the boat. And when she did get to the boat, they tied her to a stake. She pleaded with them, but they only laughed as they set the stake ablaze and let the boat set shore for any place.
Rosemary's pain feuled her rage as well. She hated the men who totured her, but soon found she hated everyone. Then she coudldn't think about anything but the pain of the fire. The awful pain. She still remembers her last sight while being alive. Shadow Isles, then she was consumed in flame, but her hatred never let her stop. She was in a state that always pained her, but never let her go. So she continued to League of Legends, hoping for satisfaction in her hunger.
"The pain, oh but the power." - Rosemary

I shortened it as promised! So as usuall, let me know what you think and I'll update this based on your feedback! I basically do this type of thread in this format by the way :D
Hope you enjoy!


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the MS you get from W is a lot so id lower it by A LOT

the damage from E is pretty high too

the stun from Q is a bit long

the ult doesnt really look like it works with her kit something like an AoE CC type attack that could fear considering shes a ghost and it could work with her kit better than an AD buff
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Haha, thanks! You really know your way with champions.
W - the MS is actually similar to Evelynn's speed, but I guess lowering it would help.
E - I've changed this so that it has fear and lowered the damage that it does as well.
Q - I don't know about 0.5 seconds to merely 2.5, but I've lowered the AP on it.
R - Giving the ult fear does make sense, and I will put it in, but I'm unsure still if to take out the AD buff or not, or give her AD and AP buff.
Overall - I've added AD to her abilities to let her be more of an AD type champion.


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its good that the ult has some CC now

the reason Eve has such a high MS buff is so that she can spam the hate spikes and be a good assassin, this sounds like a good AP mid champ which is why im unsure about the AD scaling she has

can you explain the passive, if its for when she gets down 50% hp it would only happen once, is it like every time she goes under 50%? and is it permanent ?
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I wasn't sure whether or not to have the AD scaling in there so that's why I had the MS in there, but I suppose I can try another ability idea for that slot.
The passive is like Ezreal's, and if someone's damaging you overtime (like every seven seconds or under), 50% of that damage adds on +10 ability power for seven seconds or until they hit her again. I meant to add the seven seconds part.


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ah ok so that passive is like when you get attacked you get more AP sorta like karmas passive with lower hp means more AP ok, the MS could make sense if she was a melee AP champ instead of a ranged one
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Oh, right! I shall change that and we shall be happy :D
I'll probably change the lore as well and add some stats (I think the lore is too long).


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