There were a bunch of hooks that i really liked, they're good overall (well at least better then any hook i might hope to score since i dont play thresh)
The montage isn't that bad, maybe it was a bit static and the music a bit repetitive, you could as well try to change it at some points, maybe highlighting some moments with slow-motions and such. It also depends if you prefer a more fun type of montage or a professional one.
In the end it's not that bad at all, but it can always be better, do not only listen me, instead you should gather feedback from other people, especially from your vids' comments section.
For how poor my feedback might is, i hope it helped somehow. ^^
The montage isn't that bad, maybe it was a bit static and the music a bit repetitive, you could as well try to change it at some points, maybe highlighting some moments with slow-motions and such. It also depends if you prefer a more fun type of montage or a professional one.
In the end it's not that bad at all, but it can always be better, do not only listen me, instead you should gather feedback from other people, especially from your vids' comments section.
For how poor my feedback might is, i hope it helped somehow. ^^
PEANUT Secret wrote:
Thanks guys for your feedback, was my first montage so i know there is a lot to improve but i think the gameplay side of it was nice already ;)
To be honest I also liked the chill tone of the music + no hard editing (the whole "static and repetitive" jack rubino said), but maybe it's because I'm getting kind of overrun by ThePeacePigeon/UberDanger overedits.
I guess you could try doing something different, because keeping the level of this kind of montages is really hard, so I would alternate montages like this one (little editing, good plays preferably in rythm with the music) with whatever else you want to add (fun plays, overedits, full gameplays, tutorials).
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