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Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"All done, next sprint will be mid-march"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Thy sins
1. Frozen mallet, black cleaver and only 1 real defensive item.
2. Alacrity
3. 23-4-3
4. No explanations for each individual ability
5. Only 1 rune explained
6. Only 5 items explained
7. No tactical section
8. No C2V
Thy blessing
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Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Cheatsheet: 18/20
9/10 item picks + structure
Seems fine
9/10 the rest
This too
Structure + coding: 5/15
5/10 uses of overviews, schemes and other uses of structure[/c"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Thy sins
1. Ability explanations are mainly Riots explanations.
2. Tactical section is about early game only.
3. Patches chapter seems like an useless chapter.
Thy blessing
1. All basics included
2. Good use of structure and coding
3. Solid buil"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Thy sins
1. No boots in the example build
2. Summary should be in the introduction
3. "Aaatrox"
4. Recommended and not recommended summoner spell list should get removed. Instead, only keep the explained summoner spells.
5. One line explanations
6. Not all item"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Thy sins
1. Sneaky little bastard. Trying to hide your oneline explanations in your rune section. Expand and explain why your runes are better than the alternatives :P
2. "Which is a horrible item on Miss Fortune." Should be -> 'Trinity force is a horrible item"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Thy sins
1. Most of the build explanations are one-line explanations :/
2. Log should always be the final chapter
3. Matchups section is breaking up the tactical chapters, put the tactical chapters behind eachother instead.
Thy blessing
1. Good us"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Sorry for being late:
Thy sins
1. Cheatsheet too complicated. Make it more compact.
2. Summoners insight >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> strength of spirit
3. One-line explanations
4. No alternative runes mentioned
5. Gameplay section waaaa"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Sorry for being late:
Thy sins
1. No structured cheatsheet. Break it up in each build to something like this (not exactly like it): Starting items #1 -> Starting items #2 -> First recall -> Core -> Defensive options -> Offensive options
2. Put tactical chap"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Feb 28th, 2014
"Sorry for the late review, but here we go:
Thy sins
1. Full attack speed runes
2. Boots start
3. Teleport for an ADC
4. Cheatsheet is a mess
5. Masteries make no sense (go 21-9-0 instead)
6. All content and explanations in spoilers
7. Chapter order makes no sense
8."
