1) You can't take a 3rd command attack at level 4
2) Items were so messy, final build versus your explanations just didn't match up; you had archangel's in build, but abyssal in explanation. Also, seraph's embrace is not really "different" than archangel's.

3) A big "con" of Orianna is her lack of mobility/dash, she just has her dissonance which requires positioning skill.

i'm gonna give you my honest opinion. its a pretty bad guide but i've seen a lot worse :/ the content itself was pretty good but also hard to understand because of grammer and spelling errors. overall pretty good

IMO: Orianna with abyssal doesn't work too well, as she outranges it iirc. Also, tear + athenes gives a huge damage loss as it prevents an early deathcap. (just saying things from the top of my head)

Don't worry becakun, I don't know if I've ever seen Janitsu write a positive review on a new guide before, so you're par for the course.

As far as the guide goes, I don't vote on other Ori guides because I think it is in bad taste to do so, but I will give a few pointers for you :)

Rearrange your runes in your build so that it reads: Marks, Seals, Glyphs, Quints
By doing that you make them easier to follow since they are in the same order as your rune pages.

In your build you suggest buying a tear to help with mana sustain, but the item does not build into anything else. If you are going to have it in your primary build path (the one everyone sees when they open your guide) this inconsistency should be addressed. Now if you feel that Abyssal is the way to go most of the time then you should remove the tear completely so that a new player blindly following your cheat sheet doesn't get confused.

You have the same banner for your Ability and Pros/Cons sections.

That's it for now. I hope you found the post helpful and I look forward to you updating your guide :)

Loved the guide, your images are very preety

I missed the part with PM, sorry.

I disagree. He can downvote to whatever standard he wants and he also offered advice by way of a PM.

Sorry guys! It's my first guide so I'm trying to do my best! Bu thanks for your advices.

I wasn't saying that these things are flawless, just not the particular reason to downvote especially without explaining it!

Masteries might not be as important, but there are definitely better specs that can be taken.

Item choice and prioritization is an issue, particularly encouraging boots rush and Liandry's Torment.

Runes don't really help laning at all and there are definitely better choices to be made here.

Tbh Masteries, Items and Runes aren't that bad. Just don't always throw your standard reasonings in there! ^_^

I downvoted due to:

Runes
Abilities
Items
Masteries
The rather short length of the guide


For further elaboration send a PM to me.