Owen's Review Shop!

[quote=OwenTheAwesomer][center][size=6][color=#ff0000]Currently Out Of Order[/size] I would recommend going to Crs Dekar's, Utopus', Embracing's, or Foxy Riven's shops instead untill I am back in business.[/color] [/center] [center][h1]OwenTheAwesomer's Review Shop[/h1][/center] [center][color=#00ffff]Welcome to my guide review shop![/color][/center] Hello everyone, my name is Owen and this is my brand new review shop! Ive been looking for ways that I could contribute to the Mobafire community and considering I am not a very good artist, this is where I ended up. I hope I can help you improve your guides through constructive criticism and ensure your success in the future. [color=black]X[/color] ------------------------ [color=black]X[/color] [center][color=#00ffff]The cost of a review[/color][/center] [color=black]X[/color] [center]All reviews are completely free but if you feel I have been a big help in your efforts to achieve excellence then a [color=#800080]+rep[/color] is greatly appreciated! If there is anything else you think I could help you with don't hesitate to ask![center] [color=black]X[/color] -------------------------------------- [color=black]X[/color] [center][color=#00ffff]I don't have many rules but it is essential that you follow them for me to be able to review your guide![/color][/center] [color=black]X[/color] [list] [*] You have written your guide in English! English is my only fluent language and for me to judge fairly it is best I can understand your guide. [*] The champion (or other context) has been on live servers for 2 weeks. This way the community (including myself) have had time to play around with the new champion, item, map, or whatever it is your guide is about. [*] Your are willing to take constructive criticism to improve. If you are unwilling to take my criticism then there isn't much point to having your guide reviewed. [*] You are dedicated to your guide and have worked hard on it. You should have worked on your guide for a decent amount of time and have self revised it before submitting it for review. [/list] [center][color=#ff0000]Those are the rules, the only punishment for breaking them is that I will not be able to review your guide.[/color][/center] [color=black]X[/color] --------------------------------------------------------------- [color=black]X[/color] [center][color=#00ffff]These are the things you should expect out of my reviews[/color][/center] [color=black]X[/color] [list] [*] I will read your entire guide no matter how long it is. [*] I will provide constructive criticism for each individual chapter. [*] I will give you a score between 1-10, and link your guide in the "Reviewed Guides" chapter below. [*] In some cases, I will upvote your guide or even give you a [color=#800080]+rep[/color] if it is exceptional. [*] If I am reviewing your guide for a second time I will leave my remarks on how it has improved since last time I saw it. [/list] [center][color=#ff0000]If you realize that I have failed to do any of these things then send me a message and I will certainly go over anything I happened to miss.[/color][/center] [color=black]X[/color] ------------------------------------------------ [color=black]X[/color] [center][color=#00ffff]Your guide will be reviewed based on the following sections[/color][/center] [color=black]X[/color] [list] [*] [color=#ff0000]Content:[/color] Does your guide cover a variety of basic tips, and advanced tactics to suit all levels of players? Does it cover all you need to know to excel at a certain champion? [*] [color=#ff0000]BBCode/Appearance:[/color] Is you guide simply a wall of text or does it include a variety of formatting techniques and images that improve the aesthetics of your guide? [*] [color=#ff0000]Viablity:[/color] Is your guide for bruiser Miss Fortune jungle? Unless your guide is aimed to be comical the champion you're highlighting should be played in a viable role. If your guide is off-meta then show reasons to support why that champion is strong in such a way/role. [*] [color=#ff0000]Spelling mistakes:[/color] Spelling mistakes often drive away many people because they feel that if you cant spell, then your information is not reliable. Spelling is a very simple thing to fix so try to have it as perfect as possible. [*] [color=#ff0000]Structure:[/color] Your guide should be structured in such a way that your reader should not be confused while reading it from top to bottom. A chapter about "Abilities" should be discussed before a chapter about "Teamfighting" so that everyone can follow along with your guide. [color=black]X[/color] -------------------------------------------------- [/list] [color=black]X[/color] [center][color=#00ffff]By evaluating based on these key points I will provide a score between 1 and 10[/color][/center] [color=black]X[/color] [list=1] [color=#ff0000]1: Horrible[/color] - Downvote [color=#ff0000]2: Really Bad[/color] - Downvote [color=#ff0000]3: Bad[/color] - Downvote [color=#ffff00]4: Needs Major Improvements[/color] - Downvote/No vote [color=#ffff00]5: Decent[/color] - No vote [color=#ffff00]6: Needs some work[/color] - No vote/Upvote [color=#01DF01]7: Decent[/color] - Upvote [color=#01DF01]8: Great guide[/color] - Upvote [color=#01DF01]9: Awesome, needs few improvements[/color] - Upvote [color=#FA58F4]10: Perfect![/color] - +Rep [/list] ----------------------------------------- [color=black]X[/color] [center][color=#00ffff]Please use the following format when reviewing[/color][/center] [list] [*] Summoner Name: What is you summoner name on your main account? [*] Summoner Level/Rank: What level are you, if you are level 30 what rank are you? [*] Server: Do you play on NA servers, EUW servers etc.? [*] Link To guide: Link me to your guide. [*]Special Requests/Anything Else: Is there anything you would like me to look at specifically in your guide, anything non review related I could help you out with? [/list] [color=black]X[/color] [center][color=#ff0000]Please use the proper format when requesting! It makes it much easier for me to track who wants a review.[/color][/center] [color=black]X[/color] ------------------------------------------- [color=black]X[/color] [center][color=#00ffff]All guides I review will be linked here with your score. Guides receiving a 9 or a 10 will be posted in the Hall of Fame as well as below![/center][/color] [spoiler=Completed Reviews] [list] [*] Usernamesaywha's [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/reviving-yorick-top-429520#]Yorick[/url] guide - 8.5/10 [*] Re4XN's [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/mundo-how-to-go-where-you-please-all-dem-matchups-423329]Dr. Mundo[/url] guide - 9.5/10 [*] Amandamonium's [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/our-most-awakened-inclination-support-karma-401625]Karma[/url] guide - 8/10 [/list] [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=UsernameSayWha]Summoner Name: usernamesaywha Summoner Level/Rank: Platinum 2 Server: NA Link To guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/reviving-yorick-top-429520 Special Requests/Anything Else: N/A[/quote]

[quote=Re4XN]Summoner Name: Re4XN Rank: Silver II Server: EUW Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/mundo-how-to-go-where-you-please-all-dem-matchups-423329]Mundo![/url] Special Requests: None (sorry for not including an URL, apparently it won't let me)[/quote]

[quote=OwenTheAwesomer][quote=Re4XN]Summoner Name: Re4XN Rank: Silver II Server: EUW Link: In my Signature Special Requests: None (sorry for not including an URL, apparently it won't let me)[/quote] Pretty long guide you got there! I will begin to review it when I find myself some free time. Please be patient because your guide is quite extensive. Owen[/quote]

[quote=Re4XN][quote=OwenTheAwesomer][quote=Re4XN]Summoner Name: Re4XN Rank: Silver II Server: EUW Link: In my Signature Special Requests: None (sorry for not including an URL, apparently it won't let me)[/quote] Pretty long guide you got there! I will begin to review it when I find myself some free time. Please be patient because your guide is quite extensive. Owen[/quote] Oh, no problem! I was expecting this xd Take your time.[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]Summoner name: amandamonium Ranking: Silver IV Server: NA Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/our-most-awakened-inclination-support-karma-401625]Our Most Awakened Inclination - Support Karma[/url] Special requests: none[/quote]

[quote=Sarixis]Username: Sarixis Ranking: Silver V Server: NA Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-mantra-of-karma-388288 Notes: None I can think of.[/quote]

[quote=OwenTheAwesomer][quote=The_Nameless_Bard]Summoner name: amandamonium Ranking: Silver IV Server: NA Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/our-most-awakened-inclination-support-karma-401625]Our Most Awakened Inclination - Support Karma[/url] Special requests: none[/quote] Just to let you know I finished reviewing your guide. With just a few minor touch ups it could be perfect![/quote]

[quote=KikoHyuuga]Summoner name: KikoHyuuga Ranking: Silver V Server: EUW Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/bard-the-fattest-amp-cutest-supp-of-summoners-rift-424501 Special requests: none[/quote]

[quote=Seth346]Hello Owen! I would like to ask for a review! I'm sure you will [color=#800080]LOVE[/color] my visuals xD. The artist I had do them did an [color=#00ff00]AMAZING[/color] job on them. I really hope you enjoy it, and sorry its so long. Summoner name: Crs Dekar Ranking: Diamond 5 Server: NA Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/season-6-patch-5-24-riven-decimating-top-lane-404727][color=00ff00]My Riven Guide[/color][/url] Special requests: Love me! xD The link is also in my wonderful sig if that's how you would prefer to find it.[/quote]