Need some feedback

[quote=Zé Illuminati]So today I finished writing my first build. First some things went wrong, I spent half an hour typing and then accidently pressed page back. Everything was gone:( After finding some new courage, and opening the link for making a build in a new tab I have written my first guide. But im Dutch and my english isnt quite good. Is there anything in the build that sounds crazy to you or you think wtf is he talking about. Also I would like to know if the setup for my build explenation and the build itself is well explained and good. Then I can change it, adept myself to it and use the feedback for when I write other builds. You dont need to test the build, just tell me if I explaind wel etc. thx in advance[/quote]

[quote=DEWO]There is a rule of NOT linking builds. Please refer to this: [url]http://www.mobafire.com/rules[/url] Especialy to the part of: [quote] Build Advertising: Do not post links or otherwise advertise your builds in comments and forum threads. There are pages and lists across the site to show your build to those who want to visit it. Pasting your build link in relevant conversation is one thing, dropping links and otherwise advertising around the site in an attempt to get more visits is another. Don't make us create a Dunce topic, leave the spam alone. You can read more about this rule [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/theorycrafting/forum-rules-no-build-linking-669]here[/url]. [/quote] Please remove the link from your post[/quote]

[quote=Zé Illuminati]done, is my post now ok?[/quote]