Hey there,

Here’s the review you asked for in the thread!

Click for review Cheatsheet and build You got two split builds (assassin & bruiser). I recommend adding another build in the basic setup of the guide so you can make two separate cheatsheets rather than having both of them in the same one. The notes for the runes are too long. Avoid explaining why you go X rune. But just tell people to go X when Y. Just looking at the (items part of the ) cheatsheet it is a bit hard to discern the build. Adding a block with core items would definitely help. It would also be beneficial to make blocks with situational items + notes explaining when they are taken. Don’t throw all of them in a single block, like they are right now. Try to make multiple where you discern different scenario’s (e.g. vs CC, vs AD etc). Some of the notes are also on the long side, It’s not necessary to explain your skill order in the cheatsheet as you already do so in the body of the guide. Kayle is mentioned twice in your synergies. Pros/Cons The pros explanation is more geared towards why you take blue kayn over red kayn. I think it could be worthwhile to make a separate section where you explain why you'd always go blue Kayn (instead of going red). Then in the pros/cons you can stay focused on the strengths of the pick itself. On the other hand this might have some overlap, so it's up to you to decide. Almost all of the pros/cons repeat Blue Kayn X. It's better to just remove this as the reader already knows that the guide is about Blue Kayn and reading that fact ten more times can be quite annoying. Some of the notes can also be a bit shorter considering the fact that they are repeated/expanded on right below (e.g. “Blue Kayn is bad into stuns/knockups, where you can get cc'd on sight and instantly die cause you are squishy.” -> “Struggles vs CC”). Blue form/Abilities The “Blue form” part would be more at place in/around the gameplay section. It’s mostly a gameplay mindset for playing around passive rather than describing the kit itself. The names of abilities & items in their respective sections are not capitalized or the entire word is capitalized. Try to be consistent with this, names always start with capital letters. There is also a loose icon=reaping slash in the SA part of the abilities. In the tips of the abilities you can split some of the larger paragraphs up in tinier tips. I also recommend moving them to their respective abilities. That way the section as a whole becomes easier to digest & creates more space between the ability descriptions. Runes/Items In the runes there's talk about items, which is quite confusing since the runes are located before the items (This happens at the runes shard & Absolute Focus). Quoted: also you feel like you need to get Serylda's Grudge third cause they are buying a lot of armor, but you still don't need to run the conqueror and eclipse playstyle This is a bit odd as runes are picked going into a game and items are build during a game. I think it would be better to put the and Transcendence options in a paragraph below the current runes, where you explain the specific scenario in which they are taken. The whole item section is shifted to the right for some reason. There are also some typos in there as well as the capitalization thing I mentioned at the abilities. The items and runes do not really match with your cheatsheet. The runes in the sense that the Conqueror page is missing & the items in the sense that it is not clear that Eclipse & Prowler's Claw should be bought with distinct rune pages. Gameplay The gameplay section seems good to me information wise. I would split the Mid game information up into two or three paragraphs though.

The presentation of the guide is alright. The templates do their job & enhance clarity. Main point of improvement is making sure the cheatsheet & runes/items in the guide match, as it is a little confusing right now. Besides that I think it is an okay guide, it actually covers a lot of information despite what one might think looking at it's length.


I hope you are able to do something with the feedback, feel free to reply if you have any questions/remarks.

Good luck updating & upgrading your guide!