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ALL POSSIBLE OPTIONS FOR NUNU JG [ 14.8 ] [CHALLANGER] [800K PTS]

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Hey Zasrana You left a request on my guide review service post and I am a bit late as these posts rarely ever ping me, but I am here now. So let's go ahead and see what all you have here. STRUCTURE: Basically how clean, tidy and organized your guide is in every section. CONSISTENCY: The frequency at which you reuse assets or keep the same tempo. INCLUDINGS: What I believe you should add in to spruce things up. MY CONCERNS: Anything that doesn't pique my interest enough to serve as a guide or as filler.
Items and Runes So, ultimately, you are not using this function effectively enough for me to deem it nice or clean. It's just too overwhelming and repetitive in terms of things being shown, and every single comment area you have for them is blank because you've just put a space there and no text, thus lowering the quality of this section. You should include a quick explanation of what each build is made for, delete any repetitive elements, and do something along these lines below.
Your example My example You can see how more condensed you can make it, as long as you don't use too many words or items that are already in the "core" builds. A tidy cheat sheet is a good cheat sheet as it helps be straight and to the point but detailed.
Compared to your runes and items section, you actually go into some detail about every match-up you get into, this is the style of detail I would have liked to see in the above section. Nothing really to add about this part. It's good as is.
In my opinion, a guide that uses nothing but walls of text and no actual code (BBCode) tends to push me away from feeling invited into the guide as a content creator here on Mobafire. I understand how difficult and time-consuming this can be, especially for those who are just starting out, but there are a lot of great guides on how to get started with some very basic coding to tidy up walls of text and non-centered content, beginning with columns and proper spacing. If you discuss a champion's ability in the same paragraph, it's usually best to use it once and then return to the explanation of his (Q) for the rest of that section, as it does begin to pile up once you've shouted Biggest Snowball Ever! 4 in a row.
After reviewing your guide, which is somewhat lacking in a few areas, I would strongly advise you, if you have the time, to learn from one of the many BBCODE guides available on Mobafire from Katasandra or a few others and create some graphs that are more appealing and can be used by a person in seconds while carrying it with them. You use codes once with Pros and Cons, but it's mostly a copy pasted thing from one of those guides. You have the start of something that could be great. Example You might also go over Nunu's abilities in greater detail, including any unique combinations or methods that can be used to exploit or employ him more effectively. But I understand that folks who play the game at a high level may not have the time or patience to put in the effort. Consider these possibilities, and then look at numerous top-rated guides. You'll notice certain similarities between them, the most notable of which is that they're all very well-thought-out in their design and explanation. Don't punch me! ~Cat

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Thanks for the review.. Ill try to make the builds like you showed in the example becouse I think it looks a lot better this way too and when I have some time Ill look into the BBcode :D thx!

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Hey there Zasrana Hyenaa,
You asked for a guide review from this thread, so here it is.

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How does this review work:

I'll be going into four 'main' topics: Cheatsheet, Content, Presentation and What can be Improved?. All of these topics alone can turn a great guide into an even better one. Just knowing the ins and outs of your champion alone won't be enough if you're not able to properly convey said information. The end goal is always to make it easier for the readers that come to your guide of course.

I'll specify these main categories with purple text within this review, as well as some subcategories which will mostly depend on your guide chapters and for that I'll use the following rating system:

rating system

Cheatsheet

>Runes: Adequate

The notes for the rune page "Best Nunu Runes" doesn't make any sense. If is really good but games are stalling for longer time so it's not advised to pick the rune, then the rune is not good. This is just a contradiction. At the same time, don't suggest picking MS stat shards if the stat shard sucks, just don't mention it at all.

Instead I'd advice to explain why this rune page is good on Nunu. We know it's the best Nunu page, but why?

What's the difference between the "best nunu runes" and the "best ap runes"? When should the reader pick each page. They can't both be the "best" page. There's no such thing as more than 1 "best" page, I'm sure you know this too. One page is better than the other, that's why it has the name.

"Best Tank Runes" still mention armor and magic resist shards in the notes, that don't apply anymore.

I see no reason to build and be a "supporting jungler" over any other rune page, to me it sounds completely useless and nowhere is it explained why it would be viable.

>Summoner Spells: Exquisite

>Items: Decent

No mention of why you should build in your boots part (includes plated/mercs only).

The start of your items are good, the end is ugly. Why are there 4 different full builds where one even goes above the full items you can even have (6)? Just make 1 full build example and keep it at that, if you need to explain something specific, like a specific item being good for one thing, then put that at the end with your "important items to fill your build" as these are situational problems, and not everygame go-to's. You've already done it with the 7 situational items you already have in there, so why not I wonder? This problem exists for all your "group" builds, Hybrid, AP and Tank. There are too many example builds, get rid of them, just use 1, nothing else of value gets explained having more of them.

Support nunu sucks, why is it even here. This has never been viable and statistics even show that nobody bothers building this. You're more in luck seeing built over this.

>Ability Order: Adequate

Try to explain why each ability order should be picked. Right now you just mention that it's "up to preference" which doesn't really help readers understand why they should pick either one.

>Threats & Synergies: Exquisite

Content

>HYBRID NUNU - A TIER SEASON 14: Exquisite

Note: I do not really have anything to point out as a "flaw" with these sections as they only explain a particular playstyle (that is fine), but nothing else of value.

>AP NUNU - B TIER: Exquisite

>TANK NUNU - C TIER: Exquisite

>SUPPORT JG NUNU - COMING SOON: Exquisite

At the end of the day this is your guide, and you can choose to keep this chapter if you'd like. But in my personal opinion, remove this, support nunu jungle does not exist nor is it ever viable.

>PROS/CONS: Exquisite

>WHERE TO START? (MACRO): Exquisite

>LVL 3 GANK (MACRO): Exquisite

>GANK (MACRO): Exquisite

>OBJECTIVES (MACRO): Exquisite

>PUSH LANES (MACRO): Exquisite

>ENEMY JUNGLER TRACKING (MACRO): Exquisite

>TRICKS (Important to learn or keep in mind while being OTP or huge main): Exquisite

>SEASON 14: Exquisite

>ABOUT ME: Exquisite

Note: I honestly have no idea why the "about me" section is literally at the end of the guide? Don't you want to introduce yourself to your readers first so that they know who they're actually reading about? Doesn't make much sense.

Presentation

> Execution: Will need a lot of work

If there's one thing I'd say about your guide that I feel like you can improve on, it'll definitely be this. I know very well that making use of BBCode can be a very tedious task in of itself to make use of or just to be able to get familiar with in general, but when it comes to presentation, making use of some more code can really make your guide become more alive, so to say.

Here are a few coding guides that we already have on the site that could help you if you'd be willing to dedicate some of your time to learning it (or if you just want some quick templates to make your guide look a bit more tidy):

- Making A Guide (has lots of free to use templates)
- BBCode Guide (the actual bbcode guide if you'd want to know how different codes work)
- A Table Coding Guide (talks about the bbcode that is called tables)
- Responsive Columns (talks about responsive columns; mainly for mobile side coding)

>Theme of guide (color scheme): Will need a lot of work

I feel like having a bit of a color theme would go a long way for any guide. This will be especially clear if you were to incorporate some BBCode for your sections. When I say the word 'color theme' I mean using colors that best represents the champion & guide you're trying to make. For example, you're currently using the Classic Nunu skin, which means that a good color theme to have could be e.g. Blue to fit with the skin. If you were to not use another skin, you'd use a color that comes from that skin and so forth.

What can be Improved?

Making guides more extensive takes a very long time and a lot of dedication, but if you want to spend more time making your guide more informative try to explain more topics such as:

- How to play around objectives - You're a jungler
- Explaining the actual jungle matchup - It always varies, it's never the same playstyle no matter what
- How to Gank in more detail - Explain how you gank, not just "gank as much as possible"
- Vision
- Combos?
- Vertical Jungling, it exists, how do you do it and why
- What are plants and what do they help with
- Wave Management - Junglers have them too not just laners (Pushing, Holding & Taxing), you only explain how to push
- Lane Priority
- Objectives in more detail - Which objectives are more valuable than others, which can be skippable
- How does counter-jungling or invading work
- Potential win cons - If any, again objectives play a good part here
- More advanced descriptions of the routes (could use BBCode here) to make it clearer - Explain why some of these routes are good, what are they good into? And what can they gain?

These topics can all be useful topics to explain, and of course there can be multiple more I haven't mentioned that you can talk about when it comes to Jungle as a role, but I feel like these are some of the more important ones to consider.

Overall Thoughts

For a guide you've made, it's pretty alright. The information as previously mentioned is fine, but it doesn't actually go deep into all that many aspects. If you add some more sections and work more on the presentation aspect of your guide, then this guide can definitely become a good source for players looking to pick up . I hope this review is of help. :)