Pretty cool, but not a fan of the blood thing coming out of the border, unless it was more than just that little corner o-o
Thanks to TRUeLM, Plastictree, Scrax, Xiaowiriamu, foggy12, JahGFX, jhoijhoi, msrobinson, JEFFY40HANDS, Nyoike, MissMaw, and me :) for the sigs!
Nice signature man, and i like your current one, you've blended your render nicely, and the background is nice as well, not sure whats going on but it works I suppose. :)
Criticism:
1. Hard to read text
2. Too much lighting
3. There's no true focus point
4. Slightly plain imo.
5. Red splatter coming out from border
Tips:
1. Change font or remove the blood effect, and put some outer glow on, that seems to be the overall style of your signature since it is bright, not too much outer glow though, possibly 30% opacity at 10px size 5px soft
2. Try dodge/burn tool to help with the lighting, or use lighting effects or a soft px. this should help give a better contrast and also help with the focal point
3. Sharpen your render to help make Katarina the focal point (sharpen tool is good for this)
4. It looks plain to me, but that's my opinion, i would probably suggest centering your render a bit, however for some signatures its not needed. Hopefully though by introducing a more efficient light source and focal point it'll distract the plain feel of the signature will go.
5. Delete red splatter
Additional:
1. Test on gradients, although the color scheme is near perfect you want to try adjust the colors slightly, you never know it could look better.
2. Try add fractuals or c4ds to give it an edge.
Hope this helps.
Criticism:
1. Hard to read text
2. Too much lighting
3. There's no true focus point
4. Slightly plain imo.
5. Red splatter coming out from border
Tips:
1. Change font or remove the blood effect, and put some outer glow on, that seems to be the overall style of your signature since it is bright, not too much outer glow though, possibly 30% opacity at 10px size 5px soft
2. Try dodge/burn tool to help with the lighting, or use lighting effects or a soft px. this should help give a better contrast and also help with the focal point
3. Sharpen your render to help make Katarina the focal point (sharpen tool is good for this)
4. It looks plain to me, but that's my opinion, i would probably suggest centering your render a bit, however for some signatures its not needed. Hopefully though by introducing a more efficient light source and focal point it'll distract the plain feel of the signature will go.
5. Delete red splatter
Additional:
1. Test on gradients, although the color scheme is near perfect you want to try adjust the colors slightly, you never know it could look better.
2. Try add fractuals or c4ds to give it an edge.
Hope this helps.
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Constructive Criticism please? :)