Scrax's WIP Presentation and Art Discussion

[quote=Scrax][url=http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/253/9/3/93c2a8eae78f4dff18a49b3dbf84df08-d49gmx3.png][img float=left]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/8933/glowthumb.png[/img][/url] [h2]Current work in progress[/h2] Really do not have any comment on this one. I was bored, and slightly tipsy (hence the edges). Thoughts and suggestions? [center]More of my shizz can be found here: [url=http://scraxlol.deviantart.com/][img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/7113/devart.png[/img][/url] You'll need to be registered and +18 to view some of the images.[/center] [right][h4]More content is coming soon![/h4][/right][/quote]

[quote=Scrax][img float=left]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/184/b/f/bf23bebf9b8468793ca958493ba4b629-d3kw2ac.png[/img] [h2]Newest Creation[/h2] Very, very abstract color explosion I so aptly named 'Vibrant Colors'. Making this one was a tonne of fun, mainly because I had to avoid seizures all the time. Thoughts? :) [right][h4]More content is coming soon![/h4][/right][/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf]The colors are nice. The car in the bottom right corner seems a little out of place or off color. IMO, it needs to be darker. Also, her face looks a little... odd. Color wise anyway. One more thing I noticed. The bottom right section is fading through her skirt. Intentional? Looks good though.[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]I like it. Although I agree her face does look a bit odd colorwise.[/quote]

[quote=wRAthoFVuLK]I like it very much :) sad you censored the best part though... :D[/quote]

[quote=Scrax]Yeah, that car is taking too much attention from the picture. Need to tone it down a bit. The skirt is "transparent" (clipper added on top of the render) on purpose, but mostly to see how it would look. What do you suggest I do with the face? Her head has always been kinda big and weird. EDIT: New picture in the OP. Fixed the car, removed the skirt issue but left some dark color, "balanced" the lighting in her face. Thoughts?[/quote]

[quote=DEWO]I dont like the censored part. Also her face is a bit too darkish :P[/quote]

[quote=wRAthoFVuLK]Better; I think you need to balance the tones in her forehead a tad though :3[/quote]

[quote=Scrax]Uncensored can be found on my deviantART! :) And I made her face darker because she's kind of.. Strutting her breasts out, and this makes it more obvious (without really ruining the picture).[/quote]

[quote=Canoas]Is that a real picture? Or did someone photoshop it? Still, it looks pretty good. I think there's too much contrast on the top left corner though. The green is too light and her hair is too dark, it ends up changing the focal point of the tag. I mean, my instinct tells me to look at the chest, but the light tells me to look at the green part. The face is also a bit too dark in my opinion. You should have just darkened her left side of the face, the other is already dark enough. Other than that it's awesome. The colours match nicely, the transparency looks pretty cool and the way you used the shadows make her look a lot hotter.[/quote]