Kazega's Thread of Review

[quote=Tr4ce]Summoner Name: zTrace Post Count at Time of Request: 300+? Guide is for: Orianna Have you played the Champion since the Last Patch? Of course :] I own her :] Why I want the guide to be reviewed: FeedBack Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/you-know-you-want-to-touch-these-balls-154160[/quote]

[quote=Kazega]Sorry about the lack of Reviews over the last couple of days. I will get back on top of it tomorrow Please be patient I will get to your guides soon enough[/quote]

[quote=Kirluu]Could I get some answers on my questions on the previous page? Would be awesome, thanks :) You're the only one left I need to hear from in order to start my rebuild of my guide. I've seen many of my mistakes, and still need to find out exactly how to handle them.[/quote]

[quote=Kazega]Here are a few answers for you Kirluu. For anythign else PM me. [quote]1. Could you give me some ideas of how I can make the items section less "cluttered". I found that the way I split it up into starting items, core items, end-game items and finally "Other Viable Items" was a pretty good way to be able to make some different things clear.[/quote]Your chapter, "Other Viable Items for Build 1" is a wreck: columns aren't lined up right and you other item chapters have varying column width. To make this a little better space your columns in separate formats try using something like this: (Columns)(nextcol).....(/columns) (Columns)(nextcol).....(/columns) and so on. remember to keep one set of items per row. and use black text (color=#000000) to create space between the columns. [quote]2. For the case about there being two different builds with the only differences being the early game, I can see what you mean, and I'm looking for a clue here; Would it be a good idea to specifically talk about other ways to build Garen within a few chapters, as I've also done with AD-Garen? The thing is, that by doing that it would seem that these other ways are less viable than the specific one I use. I simply find mine to be the best, however it can obviously differ from game to game, and of course from summoner to summoner. Any idea how I can "list" different ways to build Garen without making it stand out as "Not as viable as my preffered build". The idea behind making a Build 2, is exactly because of this. I didn't want to make it seem like getting GP5 items is less viable than just going straight for the meat of the build. Both ways are strong ways to build Garen, and they both give each of their advantages, sometimes the GP5 is even better than how I "normally" build Garen.[/quote] Use you Items section to talk about your different build options after you explain items you then list out a build for use against differnt team compositions. [quote]Also, how can I put Atmog's Garen in there as well? I need some way to align them all being just as viable, but my personal preferances being the only matter in the case of which build I prefer. You say I should have only one main build, and I can understand that as it can be confusing to be forced to scroll up, just to check out the other builds as I mention them, but then how should I do it?[/quote] the best way to do this is to explain the different pros and cons of the build [quote]3. About the laning part, I realize that I jump rather rashly into the laning opponents - Would you say that taking up fx. Aggression and Mentality in the lane before looking at laning opponents?[/quote]Don't just explain the balance of patience and aggression on Garren. you should also explain harassment, last hitting, tactics, and anythign else you feel a Starting Garen should know.[/quote] [quote]4. About the "Can be viable" thing... The only place I actually say that is while talking about AD Garen.[/quote]It's very noticable with the way you put it in there so I had to pick on it. [quote] The reason I say this about AD Garen is because AD Garen doesn't go into my image of a ranked play Garen. AD Garen doesn't have the tankiness that my build gets alongside with damage.[/quote]Love it. I absolutely love what you are saying here. Why? Because it is YOU! you have this image of Garen and you are running to Seattle and back with this image you have. I have the same notion when it comes to my champions I play. I imagined Kat as a hardcore assassin and ganker and I built her around that. When I play Shyvana, I want her as Dragon-like as physically possible. You want to play Garren the way you see him, as a stalwart defender of justice and that is great.[/quote]

[quote=aviseras]Hey there! It looks like you're somewhat backed up in requests, but I definitely wanted to get in line for some feedback. I spent a lot of time testing and writing my Talon and Fizz guides, so hopefully my post count alone doesn't scare you away :/ I've linked to both and would appreciate a review for which champion you like more out of the two. If you can't decide, then go for the Talon one. Summoner Name: Aviseras Post count at time of Request: 27 Guide is for: (Champion Name) Crystal Scar Have you played the Champion since the Last patch? Yes Why I want the guide to be reviewed: Looking for more upvotes and feedback to give players solid Dominion guides (my favorite mode) Guide Links: (Talon) http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/talon-the-noxian-blade-dominion-156172 (Fizz) http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fizz-fishy-five-cap-dominion-157327[/quote]

[quote=NicknameMy]Summoner Name: NicknameMy Post count at time of Request: something around 1250, too much to count.^^ Guide is for: [[garen]] Summoner's Rift Have you played the Champion since the Last patch? Yes, the guide itself was updated to something new. It even has game stats in it from after the latest patch. Why I want the guide to be reviewed: Because of the latest changes to it. I have to know, how good it is now. And you should never pass a good [[garen]] build, do you? One thing to note: At some places, grammer is a bit bad.^^ I am german but I just can't do perfect english, well, mistakes make us human.^^ Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-spin-to-win-is-possible-revamped-133756]Garen, Spin to Win is possible[/url][/quote]

[quote=Kazega]So I've been getting a lot of flack due to how I review guides so a lot of my time is right now is defending what I am saying. I'll update the OP so that I can explain a few things that I have been saying in a couple reviews. In the mean time hold off on Requests I will get to those that have already made a request [center][h2]v v v All review requests posted below this line [b][u]WILL[/u][/b] be ignored v v v[/h2][/center] -----------------------------------------[/quote]

[quote=Kazega]------------------------ [center][b][h2] ^ ^ ^ I am legitimately surprised now one tried to offer a review. ^ ^ ^[/h2][/b][/center] Marathon Review session is over. I got one more to do, but now reviews will be limited since my own guides are need of maintenance.[/quote]

[quote=FlavoRTowN]Summoner Name: FlavoRTowN (among many lol) Post count at time of Request: 42 Guide is for: Talon Summoner's Rift Have you played the Champion since the Last patch?: Yes Why I want the guide to be reviewed: Lack of feedback Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/time-with-talon-classic-talon-158182[/quote]

[quote=princessmisery]Summoner Name: TeachezofPeachez Post count at time of Request: 100 Guide is for: Swain (Summoner's Rift) Have you played the Champion since the Last patch? Yep Why I want the guide to be reviewed: I just completely re-did the whole guide and I'm pretty happy with it now. I'd like to know what others think of it, and of course get an up-vote if I can! :) Guide Link: Just clicky the Swain in my sig please. ^_^ P.s. I am unsure if this is open or not. Your closing and then, is it reopen? Either way I'll check out every one of your guides right now and vote/comment each. Thanks for consideration. :)[/quote]