Hi there Darkspade! :)
Just noticed your guide, and since it's new, I make it my duty to go through it and give some feedback :)

Short review of your guide:

Your build seems reasonable, and I think it may work pretty well, a little unclear on Summoner Spell, Mastery and Rune choices, you could have made clearer why you choose one option over another.

It's pretty short, which is good for people who don't read much, but if your goal with this guide was to get a higher score, I suggest you go more in-depth (not sure if that's your style, but hey, it's just tips!)

Also, you could work on the design; the way it is now, the lore part looks like a giant wall of text :)

Also, your basic color coding was okay, but if you went to this page, you can read up on how to really use coding, and make an awesome Talon guide :)

I hope you had use of my review, if not, just ignore it. I'm sure you can make a good guide with Talon, since you seem to know him.

It's also nice if you can +rep me if it was useful, I'm aiming to became a guide scout, so I need 100 rep before I can become one :) Hope to hear from you in the not-so-distant future!