Doesn't work for me :/

Doran's shield... u gotta be kidding me...

Really short and unattractive to read, there are no pictures and little explanation. You need to explain your choices more and add more to this guide...like A LOT more.

Looks much better then before. I as for look of the guide I would move the pros/cons chapter to right after the intro. Also I would try and make the Items chapter in more of a list with details under each item instead of paragraph form. Lastly It wouldn't hurt to see more alternatives of what to do/build for more situational scenarios(this is not an immediate need but would help make the guide better) i.e. vs ap, vs ad, vs caster, vs melee, if you are the only carry, if you have many carries so you can focus on one area; things like that. Hope this helps.

Solid build, but one big complaint. You say you pick Doran's Shield for sustain, yet it is an incredibly bad sustain item. Let's say you're facing a Gangplank top who bought Cloth Armor and 5 Health Potions. He Parrrleys you and crits you for 200 damage when you have 550 health. you then stealth and burst him down to half hp. He instantly pops 2 potions and is back to full hp. You can't answer to that with no potions. You have slightly higher hp regen, but his parrrley is directly stopping you from regenerating. This works the same with ANYBODY who can harrass at all early game. And if their jungler decides "i wanna camp this ***** early so she can't farm and kill my team later on. Boots= either pop all 3 hp pots after the gank or b. Shield=1 death and maybe a lost lane. Mobility is so strong early on, and so are hp pots. I believe boots 3 pots start is slightly OP (its almost all you ever see anyone pick at tourney level) PS: I like the rest of the guide, I was just explaining the consequences that can come of having no heath pots in your starting items. GLHF with Eve and owning team mates that call her useless :P

^ Thank you all for the votes/comments/info, I just updated the guide (maybe little in some eyes, this being my first guide was a "a lot of little bit of work" haha, And yes Rows, I have used rageblade before, Im going to do a few tests with it and may have to add it to the item list! Didn't even think about it. Thank You All!!!

Aforementioned +1
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Solid build, but Guinsoo's Rageblade would like to have a word with your Evelynn. They can do beautiful things together. Her Q spam and auto-attacks stack the AP and attack speed absurdly quickly, making it a potent mid-game pick. +1

add some bbcodes and work out the roughness of it and i will vote you up, for now im not voting but it looks solid for the most part. (just pm me when you get it more finalized and i will vote on it)

Thanks for the feedback guys, yeah its my first guide, i def will read that, and the reason i find dorans shield working better is i find myself more-so then not left in the lane by myself and need the hp regen. Thanks for the advice tho! mucho gracias **** THIS GUIDE IS UNDER CONSTRUCTION STILL ****

Doran's Shield? DA HELL. Go for Doran's Ring if you really feel like it, but I can't agree with that. Anyway, it's a nice build, but your guide is both short and a wall of text. This is why I want you to read this guide on making a guide:
Read this to the end

That'll help you out. Also turn on comment to vote. You always want feedback on your guide if it ends up getting downvoted.

I think Giants belt from Rylais should be bought earlier due to severe squishiness (after Lich Bane) aside from that, this is a VERY solid eve build.