OOH! I like the last one the best :D

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Any CnC on this one?


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Too many colours that don't blend with the render. Text is pretty cool though black stroke wouldn't have been my first choice.
Hmm. I think I've beat this style to death - as always CnC is coo:
Hmm. I think I've beat this style to death - as always CnC is coo:


Lighting needs work and lose the border. Effects are messy.
@Grey - any suggestions on how to improve my composition? Couldn't think of another colour scheme to fit Doom :/
@Grey - any suggestions on how to improve my composition? Couldn't think of another colour scheme to fit Doom :/

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Also try working in a smaller canvas and see if you like it; at times it can be a bit easier because you have less space to fill. In that particular sig, you could basically cut off the entire left half of the canvas, because all of it is pretty much unrelated to the render and not really necessary. So, keeping the same proportions, work in smaller dimensions :)
Just my thoughts