Need help to improve my gameplay

[quote=lunatic1990]Hey there At the moment I'm a 1150 elo player and I'd like to improve. I don't believe in stuff like elo-hell (bad luck exists ofc). So I believe that I have to improve myself to get out of this so called elo-hell and would like to have some help from more experienced players. I uploaded vids of my main-champions (kennen is a new one, still don't get the hang of him) and would like to ask if anyone that got some freetime would like to watch them and do some constructive criticism - if possible. As top and jungler I normally take riven, I'm strong at mid/late game when it comes to tf but I suck at early game, although riven is one of the champs said to be best earlygame champion at top. This match I won but you can still see how I suck at early game and that I got lucky with a good jungler. http://www.leaguereplays.com/replays/match/617876/ As Support I normally take soraka and believe that I'm quite good with her. But there is always room to improve my play. Here are 2 replays. http://www.leaguereplays.com/replays/match/617873/ http://www.leaguereplays.com/replays/match/617908/ As ap I started playing Kennen (my main since lvl 12 was Ahri but recently I stopped playing her. Never got the chance to play her at ranked. - will upload a Replay with her as well if it ever comes to it ) Right now I'm really bad and am still training at normal games. Would really appreciate some tips to get better http://www.leaguereplays.com/replays/match/617872/ I would be really thankful for any tips to improve. Wanna thank of all of you in advance for taking your time! P.S: Sorry for my bad english, didn't write any proper text for at least 2 years :/7 (Gonna add Jungler Riven vid as well, when I played as him again ) Greetings, Lunatic[/quote]

[quote=Chandro]I don't have much time to respond now; I'll try to give more detail later. I watched some of your Riven vs Mundo toplane and one good piece of advice I can give you is this: Try to critically think about the ways in which you are better or worse than any given opponent. Specifically, you started boots+3, while the mundo started with a doran's shield. When you see his shield, think "How can I take advantage of this?" The answer in this case would be: "Boots+3 gives you higher speed and 450 effective hp over him, if you give all 3 potions enough time, while Mundo's lack of any potions means that any damage you do to him will regen slowly. This means that you can hurt him some, back off, potion up, and then engage him again. You could have been taking more risks with him levels 1 and 2, before he had any real chance of killing you unexpectedly, like he did at lvl 3." Also, your CS can always improve; Don't be afraid to grab a cs that's close to your opponent, only back off if they actively prevent from taking it. Decent Riven playing all around, I'll see what else I can say later.[/quote]

[quote=Embracing][quote=lunatic1990] At the moment I'm a 1150 elo player and I'd like to improve. I don't believe in stuff like elo-hell (bad luck exists ofc). [/quote] Because of this I'll check your replays later and give you some feedback (^c ^)[/quote]

[quote=lunatic1990]Wow thank you so much for responding. Going to watch my replay again, so I can see how I can improve my cs. As riven that's my mainproblem (I believe). I get scared way to often, because of the dmg from my opponents at early game. Btw here is another replay from my ahri play just a moment ago. Can someone explain me what I did wrong. - Why I couldn't carry my team? I get stats like this really often but am still at 1150 elo. What am I doing wrong :/ http://www.leaguereplays.com/replays/match/624091/[/quote]

[quote=lunatic1990]xD thank u so much :)[/quote]

[quote=Berzerk]K I watched the riven vs Mundo game. The main thing I would do in that matchups is just farm and play passive. Mundo was missing alot of farm due to his attempts to kill you, YOU were ahead in CS because he was doing this. A Mundo (Especially one with exhaust) is just a tanky laner whos hard to kill, his goal is to win lane but he does not scale as hard into late game as a riven does (As seen). In the lane I would just recommend you play it safe and farm, fight him for ganks only and just outscale him and win. A victory in lane does not always have to come from killing the enemy :P[/quote]

[quote=Embracing]I can't watch the replay for some reason D: The only generic tips I can give you are 1) Go for a lot of small harass early (E in-->W-->AA -->Q out) 2) Prioritize farming early game (Mundo has a horrible mid game compared to you) 3) Try to not engage him early (engage as in hunt him down). 4) In midgame try to shove the lane up to his turret and roam if possible 5) Force teamfights midgame if possible[/quote]